Aw . . . sweet. Anything Gumshoe/Franziska makes me go all mushy. Definate WIN. Nice Edgeworth/Franziska interaction too :)

~Em Bem~

:P

Well-written, as always. I only saw one typo, you left off a "d" somewhere but I can't remember the exact sentence...

anyway! I really liked it and I hope to see more from you!

A very well written fic. XD I love to see the siling relationship between Miles and Franziska. Of course, you nailed the pairing on the head (for me).

But it is refreshing to see something I've wanted to for a while, and so well written, none the less.

Aw! This is a very sweet little fic! I LOVE it! :) Well written, engaging, sweet, humorous and very well done. :) (I love the little PxE vignettes slipped in there as well. ;) :D )

I really like the way Franziska is written: Strong as usual though, at the same time, a little unsure of herself when she's confronted with something she's not familiar with. I really like seeing that little patch of vulnerability in her.

It doesn't diminish from her as she is, it simply makes her more human (in my opinion); we can relate to her more in that respect, I think, and understand how she's feeling when being confronted by unfamiliar feelings. I like the way Miles is written as well for the same reasons as Franziska. :) I like seeing the humanity underneath the exterior strength. :)

I think Franziska and Scruffy-er, I mean Gumshoe-would make a very good pair! :) It's quite cute to think of! :) Gummy's going to have to stay on his toes to keep one step ahead of that whip! ;D :D

Great work & well done! :)*applauds enthusiastically*