| Reviews for All's fair in love and war |
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   Discord in the Playground chapter 13 . 8/20/2009 I know this story is old - and you may even not be frequenting FFN anymore - but I have to review; I love it! The style is very interesting and accurate and the story is fascinating. I like how you developed the characters, especially Zhjaeve. And I loved the ending, I'm so happy for them after all the losses they suffered. Looking forward to more NWN2 works from you. :) |
| anesor chapter 11 . 3/7/2008 Aren't prophetic dreams a pain? I like the way your story has grown, but I must second the suggestion you skip the character bio. That info is already in your story if you've written it well. And Having that the first thing in every chapter just breaks the suspension of disbelief. It emphasizes that this is a game character, instead of as 3D a character you can manage. then it takes me at least a while to get back in the story flow... I know I'm getting intrigued with the kinds of ways stress at that final sequence shows up, and i like yours... |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 9 . 3/3/2008 Yay for Cas romance and the whole naked thing was perfect, though a waste of armor. Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 8 . 3/2/2008 Great job! I love the romance and Caleena's just unwillingness to hurt Cas. Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| keri chapter 1 . 2/26/2008 I'm afraid I'll have to say it: It's very, VERY wrong, to start with a description of your character as you do. This is the sort of information that should come out of the story itself. That being said, the rest reads decently enough. I'm only saying this because you say you want feedback and wish to improve in your writing - no bad feelings on my side at all. Be well! |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 7 . 2/24/2008 Yay for shirtless paladins working in fields and yay for rasping haystacks! Great story. Cant wait for the next chapter! Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 5 . 2/17/2008 Yes! Casavir finally told her. Took five chapters but the pally got the guts. Great job! |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 4 . 2/14/2008 YAY! Updates makes for happy fans. Love this chapter! Keep it up! Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 3 . 2/10/2008 AWESOME! Wonderful chapter, looking forward to the next. Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 2 . 2/4/2008 *standing ovation* Wonderful! Great second chapter and if you keep it up to two updates a week, you'll be getting two replies a week from me, i am loving this tale. Toodles, Deep Shadows |
| DeepShadows2 chapter 1 . 2/2/2008 i want more. Amazing way with words. Looking forward to the next update. |
