I haven't read your material for a long time. You have a wonderful grasp of the spirit (Spirit!) of the Chronicles, and your characterization is spot on. Thank you!

Egads, this was lovely. You've captured everything so well, and it's a beautiful little cut-scene. Excellent job here.

I've read all of your Narnia fics and I always find myself coming back to this one. There's something so heartwrenching yet awe inspiring in the way that Peter pass down his crown.

Thank you very much for writing this.

wow. this is. you've really captured lewis's style, you know. amazing

Great characterisation! But I was pretty confused about who the narrator was until a few paragraphs down. It would've been nice to have a clue

Lovely!

Brilliant.

Wow. /I/ got choked up reading this. Beautiful.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful

Yup, another good'un. Love how well you know these characters. Love the dialogue you give them. Love how faith overcomes over and over. Lewis should be proud of the respect and honor that you hold for his creation.

That... that was beautiful. Especially that prayer.
There is no other way to describe it. Simply, beautiful.
As all your writing is.

This story (and any other you have written regarding times after the Pevensies have left Narnia) are almost too hard for me to read. Every story about them is so real and true and beautiful I can't help but embrace them with such emotion. As such, it makes me sad to read of them here, away from their home (or about to leave it again), even more sad that when I read/watched the same happening through the books and the movie. In truth, your stories here have touched me just as much (if not more so) than the original did, so the impact this story has is even more substantial.

I'm very grateful that you have shared all of these with the rest of us. You have captured what I think to be the most beautiful thing that is the bond and love between brothers, the love of a spiritual being and for your home and family. But most amazing is your portrayal of revinim. I've always been intrigued with the notion of integrity and honor and this simply hit home with me. I have read each of your Narnia stories here at least half a dozen times each - that's not an exaggeration - and I will read them all probably for the rest of my days.

Beautiful work. Please keep it up, and thank you again for sharing this fabulous talent.

Sincerely,

AptlyAnonymous

Gloriously beautiful.

Thank you!

I know I've already done a multi-review but I was reading this fic (again. For about the 100th time) and I just felt I HAD to review.

It is utterly and completely wonderful. I cannot find a SINGLE thing wrong with it, other than it having no 'grab tissues!' warning at the top and it actually having an end. I could have read it forever and never gotten bored.

The characterisation is so spot-on it makes me want to leap for joy and do a dance. The litany, the tradition of kissing the ground, the reference to 'Thole' (which still makes me get choked up just thinking about it, by the way)... everything in this is just a pure gem.

You really have started something in me xD I've been re-reading your fics like a possessed person when I'm SUPPOSED to be studying. And since I last plagued you with my babbling I've also gotten MORE plot bunnies that shall never see the light of day in my hands. We should start a forum for them so mine can go to good homes...

Anyway. Thank you again for writing. This truly was brilliant. And it will continue to be brilliant the next hundred times I read it.

I always love stories from Edmund's point of view.