Konoha no kuni translates to land of leaves hi no kuni is land of fire

Ok little issue but it’s through not threw

Ok so even though it is a fanfic I should point out kage bunshin is B rank not S. also even if they are above canon levels at this point but not OP Sasuke could probably make maybe 2 or 3 clones at most before passing out. Sakura 1 at most I would think. And that would be pushing it

Ok so decent story so far but I should point out Konoha is short for Konohagakure which means village hidden in the leaves. Land of fire is Hi no Kuni

Why is sakura still weak with all skills she have been given

Aye m8, nice story so far. Sorry to hear about your girl, though its probably already blown over I still wish you the best. Stay Sexy.

Can you please add some punctuation like commas and other problems like the lack of a paragraph format. So far the story is great.

Sakura's eyes are green naruto eyes are blue sasuke's eyes are black

I called it. About Sasuke getting a fox. He doesn't act out of character...YET

I can picture Sasuke getting a fox and acting all out of character abot it.

NJ

Nice to be able to trick a Sannin so easily! Even if she IS the Legendary Sicker.

I enjoyed the story so far but i absolutely positively hate how u made sakura look.

Whyd u cripple her mentally anyways. I was expecting after u save her for her to still retain at least most of it.

Are u ever going to restore her memories or is she just going to b a cripple like tsunade is

Honestly when you first mentioned about putting some n\s\t I almost stopped reading your story. I'm just not comfortable with that threesome type stuff it doesn't fit into the story at all since they developed a deep relationship and they love each other I mean that would make no sense to add it. You can do like a one shot a filler chapter or something since filler in anime isn't canon so it's not canon in the story. With that you can supply the people that want it and the people who don't. I did finish your next chapter and all I have to say is sometime you use the wrong your use you're (you are) like for instance: (your pencil isn't sharpened) and (you're the beat person I know.) I hoped that helped. Great story so far. :)