I once got hiccups 3 seperate times in one day. Really bad timing too.

Yes, I want to cuddle him, he needs it. Also, that ending, it's perfect, I actually snorted before giggling.

Wrong Transformers, this is the animated show with Jack, Miko, and Raf, no Megan Fox’s here.

Hilarious, bro!
Especially , ("That was kinda cute," Jazz said.) Oh Jazz. ;D
Anyways make more please!

I like the ending. How more Autobots came so soon. And that the others learned to HOPE and not GIVE UP like they were.

I like that you put this chapter in here. I think it was a good thing that the Auobots watched it because they realized that humans aren't as different as them.

OMG I ALMOST STRTED CRYING AT THE END OH LAWD THIS IS PERFECT THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK!

Love it :-)

Im sorry, I couldn't be bothered logging in for a signed review, but ANYWAY.

This is a good story with the right amount of humor, sadness and those soft mushy bits where you just want to hug someone. (don't do that when it's your best friend and band member of the opposite gender sitting next to you)

I want to read more of this story, and good on you for telling whoever flamed to read the freaking authors note and realize that you are not telling them to believe in what you do.

I think this is the longest review I have ever left

(since my review for ch 28 got cut off I'll finish what I was saying here)

I respect that you may not have the time or have maybe lost interest in this story, so I just wanted to know if you were continuing it or not.

:) Thanks for your time.

I must say that I love this series and how you write the different situations and the Autobot's reactions to the different situations. I also love the fact that you include controversial subject matter in your stories instead of flinching away from it or glossing it over like many other have.

That said I wanted to ask if you were going to continue this series, and I only ask because you have not updated in a long while. While I would love to read more, I respect that

very rude people to complain. I like all the chapters and look forward to reading more.

I liked this chapter, abortion is a hard subject to do but you pulled it off tastefully. I always notice that the community on are usually pro-life with a vengeance and can react so very negatively and it was refreshing to see something different. As pro-choice myself it was nice to see such a thing.

Aweeee, I hope it wasn't that flame that caused you to stop writing this. These are so good. :(

I really enjoyed reading this, there's a little something for everyone in here. I laughed A LOT, sniffled occasionally, and smiled often. :)

~Pocky

You know what this chapter kinda reminds me of?

"What IS that mysterious 'ticking' noise?"

Only so much more hilarious. Hiccups can be extremely annoying, though I can't help but laugh when I have them cause it sounds so ridiculous. I could see the bots being fascinated though. x) And Jazz's 'cute' comment made me smile. :)