O! Update soon! Daniel or Fang?

Good, good, good!

But dude, you SERIOUSLY need to update!

well that... was kinda... wierd, I think. Max's dream-premonition didn't even come true!

okay, that other dude with the... sleepy-time thingy... isn't that alittle too powerful? I mean, he can just tell somebody to go to sleep and they do? what would happen if he told them to do something life-threatening, like 'stop breathing' or 'choke' or something? Wouldn't that defeat the whole purpose of this thing being titled 'War of the Flocks'? wouldn't it be instead something a little more dark depressing, hopeless? I mean, yeah, the original Flocks capture has to be sudden, but only one of the other group using his power? and they get caught in a net they can't get out of? that blows, dude!

so, to summarize what I'm sayin... what gonna happen now? over half the Flock is captured, Psuedo-Flock is pretty much gonna force Max to play on their home-turf, and I'm guessin the rest of the Flock can't help her? If I'm right, I tell you know, I'm startin to hate bein right, I sh*t you not.

:D I really love this story.[:

i love love love it but u forgot about total.

(sigh) ah, you FINALLY frucking updated... ya kno, I was starting to wonder if either you or the story was dead. but this says otherwise... uhm, last chapter, you said it was Famgy-boy that got that new healing power. As of yet, still hoping you give him a more useful, controllable power. then, everything else is good, update soon! or I'll find you! he-heeh.

i like this, its really good. keep going, please?

its awesome ! please hurry and get fax together! hurry and write person

alright, who set off that bomb? hope the rest of the Flock is ok. keep typing.

the Aviator

could you make fangs power appear in the next chapter? PLEASE

wowzumstotallyawesomestory! update soon pretty pretty please! really good i love it! and wadya know, the other flock have emotions too! but i thought jeb said they didn't have any, and therefore knew the flock better than themselves?

Heya!

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter but my computer was being mean.

The story is still totally awesome, and I'm bouncing up and down for Fang's power! I can't wait!

Oh and you're welcome! Now I still don't have a cookie! ;)

Your friend, Fang Cullen

Hehe, love the new powers! PLEASE UPDATE SON

i think i no which flock your going to kill someone in(the one with blade)

I stand by my earlier comment.I mean, my earlier comments.

an outcast.

Max be able to be lethal and control her powers

Fang also be able to control his powers.

The epic fight is coming soon,in two battle between the Flock and the Others,and,of course,Iggy vs. Fang.

totally...