Such lovely imagery and detail in this; you have a wonderfully lyrical flow to your writing. _

Although I've only seen a few episodes of Bleach, it's enough to know that your characterization of Inoue is excellent and dead on (no pun intended.) I like this pairing..._

Thank you for a most enjoyable read. _

Every good wish,

KL

"Molly" makes me imagine a weird combination of a cross between Menoly and Lolly. XD

~ That gave me goosebumps. !

Amazing! Very good story! I loved it!

I've been wondering for a while if something like that will eventually happen in the manga. It would be... very appropriate if it did, I think. Anyway, lovely concept and writing.

Ps- You did misspell Lolly as Molly, though.

beautiful imagery. very creative scene and take on orihime. A lovely contribution to the ishi/hime world.