(0o0) They do, the necklaces i mean.(0o0)

Awww .. that is so sweet.

cute

...and we're holding you to that promise. ;o))

-arizony-

So cute. :) I love how the necklaces pretty much describe Katara and Toph perfectly.

lol! its great! I love the haru joke! I think toph would love her necklace.

"Some of them weren’t even beads at all, and instead were just rocks with holes in them."

I think toph would prefer rocks over beads any day!

I think it turned out really cute. Aang was adorably in-character, and the nature of the story was just... I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job. :) Love the necklace theme, too, by the way.

Ok... COOL!

This is really, really cute so far! I'm loving it!

Hehehe, teh kawaii! I love it!

nice start! :)

haha Haru. XD

m interesting, Zuko reaction was great and Sokka joke was funny.

This once definitely going in the C2!

I like the dialog and I think this story has alot of potential for a cute romantic/comedic moment between Sokka and Toph - but some parts of this story seem a little off. When the bearded man mentioned making necklaces for their "lady friends", I was expecting Sokka to have a sad moment of reflection on Suki. And I think Aang would still be shy when it came to suggesting Katara. And I feel you should lessen your description of Sokka's necklace as it makes the rest of the story predictable - we expect anything Sokka makes to end up as a train wreck - convey that to the reader by using Aang and Zuko's reaction. The level of detail you've provided so far makes it too obvious to the reader that Toph, who is blind, is going to love the necklace because of all the textures and different bead sizes. Just tease your readers a little.