Reviews for Adieux Farewell
zara2148 chapter 5 . 1/6/2017
As I make my way through the Charmed series for the first time, that was one thing I noticed about the (frankly sloppy, if understandably so due to behind the scenes drama) transitionhow Cole seemed to have been accepted by Piper and Leo, not just tolerated for Phoebe's sake. Cole was pretty much being lightly chastised for wanting to send a guy to hell to protect their secrets, a real turnaround from how he was treated in Season 3. Before I sought out transition fic, I came to a lot of the conclusions you do here about thatthat Cole definitively closing the door on his pre-Phoebe life with his betrayal, along with the willingness to go to such lengths to protect Phoebe and the natural way death can draw people together. And while this fic is still unfinished (and at this point will probably remain so) it's nice to see those thoughts play out and it's a wonderfully written missing scenes fic as is.
Rosalia13 chapter 8 . 2/24/2011
Why'd you just leave this story? You haven't updated since 08. And now i want to know what was going to happen. So get with the program will ya? Bye!
41eugoR chapter 8 . 5/31/2010
This is one amazing post season 3 finale fic, which definitely needs to be completed. So please update whenever you can :-)
CharmedOneForever chapter 8 . 9/2/2009
Wow, this fic is amazing. The characters are so well written and each chapter has me hooked. Are you planning on updating this anytime soon? I'll keep my fingers crossed that you are!
XsunflowerX chapter 8 . 9/3/2008
I really love the way you write and I'm loving this fic!

It's all I can say at the moment but i can't wait for you to continue!
Anarra chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
interesting, please keep going.
Christine Ruud chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
Oh, this made me want to cry. How can you get everyone so perfectly? It's amazing. Cole (I've always gotta say something about this guy) leaving...I can see him doing something. They never fully explained on the show where he had been when he came back before Prue's funeral (Leo's "Look who's back" line).

I love this!
anetteo chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
Please, please post more soon!
WelshCanuck chapter 8 . 7/22/2008
Oh I like it.. You're doing a great job.. KIC
missypaige06 chapter 8 . 7/22/2008
ooh cliffhanger, its brilliant. i want more again lol. was the baby paige? who's at the door?
anetteo chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
Amazing story. One can truely picture each caracter reacting the way you've written. The way you write everything I see every scene before me. Fantasic!
Silvermoon77 chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
That was so heartbreaking. All the emotions and the impact of each chapter, well, it was a lot to feel. And that moment in the kitchen just made Cole all the more endearing. Really great chapter!
WellxWisher chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
All the while, Cole simply held her and she knew then that she would never love another man as much as she loved Cole in that moment.

OMG. As a huge Phoebe/Cole shipper, I nearly jumped up and down saying "Yes! Whoo-hoo! Whoo-hoo!" while doing a happy dance, but then I decided that it would be more dignified to simply do all that in my head.

Lovely chapter, Cole's gesture is a very sweet start to his new resolution to help his "family," and Phoebe's reactions to Piper's cold shoulder is very believable. All in all, an excellent start to part II!
missypaige06 chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
loved it, really nice imput of the premonition and lovely phoebe and cole minute. phoebes emotions were very well portrayed and piper is staying very true to character. cant wait for more :)
Christine Ruud chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
So true to character. I can see Cole making breakfast-it adds a sweetness to a not-sweet situation. Nice job with Piper too and the tying (wrote "typing"...whoops) in of what happened after Grams died. It makes sense.
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