Ah yes, when Parsely left. I never worried about it, since I'm going through my first playthrough still, and for some reason choose Lyla over Gwen for my character.

But this is an interesting angle to try at. I admit I'd never think of it, and wouldn't think it very likely, but you've done marvelously with it. Well done.

You made a sad and beautiful story, I really liked the way you portrayed the characters. Hope to see more stories from you.

That was... a really sad yet beautiful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, you did all the characters really well (including those that were just mentioned, like Katie xD). I'm glad I stumbled upon this old gem, both well-written and interesting. Lyla and Joe are two awesome characters, and you certainly brought that across well here!

Beautiful, yet sad story!

Nicely detailed and written, too!

Keep up the excellent, wonderful work! _

wonderful portrayal of character. just absolutely astounding.

Kya, I loved this! I adore STH stories and its too bad there are few fics on them because I loved the characters xD I seriously adore JoexLyla now, they'd be such a cute couple! Aww, I agree the Swallowtail ending was very sweet and it showed us a side of Lyla we never saw before. Poor Lyla though, I felt so bad for her to have to loose the one she loved. (blows nose) I loved your writing style, it was beautiful and descriptive and the words flowed so nicely together. One of my favorite few words was "previous stitched lips" I thought it was quite creative!My other favorite was the line about Katie hehe!

I loved the slight JackxGwen and KurtxDia, naww those pairings are too cute x3 I was hoping maybe you can do a sequel to this? I'd love to read the rest of it and see how it turns out! I really hope to see more JoexLyla too, this was an awesome one-shot! I hope to read more from ya and thx for writing this :)

Aww, cute!

An STH fic! Ah...yeah, it was sad that Parsley was too plant happy to care for Lyla in the game :/.

Joe's quite sweet here, and his argument with Katie is quite reasonable too. And then, GwenxJaack X3!