I'm kinda confused on who is the oni-san because I'm pretty sure only one of them can be older. I'm interested to see if Kai's dark persona will be there forever or not. Thx

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This story is so addictive

Really good story so far. I saw you updated the sequel so I had to read this one first lol anyways really great stodgy.

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1000 thank you's for this story can't wait to read the sequel.

Love the story I'm going to read the sequel.

aw danzo had to kill everything. dam neji for telling everyone about his bloodline can't keep his big mouth shut but yea awsome story and can't wait for the sequel ~ btw Yue seems like a kickass person :D

col story :D right now im just ganna keep reading until there is ino in it haha Kai seems like an awsome person. although his miraigan or however you spell it isn't very effecting cause every little thing can change the future :P

Hmm... nice integration here. You didn't leave Sasuke out of the fight or anything. He needs that ego boost. Otherwise he'll just be driven out of Konoha even faster. That's the only thing that really bothers me about this story, is that with Kai there Sasuke and Naruto don't seem to share the same bond they did in Naruto. I don't know how you're going to handle this yet, but I hope it is done well. Also if Kai got special training, than wouldn't Sasuke get some as well? even if it's just Kakashi spending an afternoon teaching him tree walking or improving his taijutsu. Surely he would have done some of that with his team?

I hope Sakura gets some more of her personality shown in this story in later chapters, because at this moment you seem to have her quite categorized. She's not all fangirl. She's quite smart. Anyways I'm just saying that in this so far in this fic she appears quite static.

So far in my reading it's been good.

nice fight scene. I liked the way you allowed both Kai and Naruto a chance to do something cool. :D Though Mizuki being able to knock out the Hokage is a long shot.

one thing bothers me though... (I know the story is complete or somehting...) but still. You have Kai and Naruto both use "oni-san" to say brother. however "oni-san" is actually "demon" the correct word would be "onii-san." The double i makes a big difference. Also "onii-san" is older brother, which makes both of them using it a bit weird.

Aw man, It's over! I'm glad that Kai and Yue escaped. Are you planning to show more of Izumi and Kyo in the sequel? Is she a jinchuriki?

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