Interesting story so far but "Calamity Asuka"? By the sounds of that prologue, poor Shinji is so screwed that he could be his own grandfather ::

Can't wait to see how he deals with this...

::fol:: Calamity Asuka, eh? Oh dear sweet chocolate. ::gigglefits::

Awesome! Moar plz!

::snickergigglefits:: This is so funny! It's awesome and 3/4!

holy Shiit. you have to update soon. i am loving this. can't wait till the next chapter. so please hurry up with it. please. until next time.

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Confusing, but still very nice.

Very strong. I like it.

That, shockingly enough, reminded me of alot of stress dreams I've had. It was pretty good though.

So Shinji just had the most incredible dream! And Asuka was there, and Touji, and Rei and - and, well, when he clicks his heels three times, there's certainly no welcoming Kansas to be found.

As I read, I was wondering why you neglected to place any sort of transition lines or formatting in-between scenes, but as a dream, which melts from one topic to the next, I see there's some method to the maddening meld of events, leaps in time and and shifts of perspective.

::foflmao:: Holy Sweet Mercenaries Guild! Awesome!

thank you. that was fcuking hilarous. I really hope you make another chapter soon. cause this is great.

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Jesus Christ that was awesome.