I love this! I so wish this had been in the show!

LOLOLOL! I loved the mental image of Teal'c fighting a Rancor-like beast and being upset at the lack of a remote activated gate. :P This one-shot was really funny, and I loved how you wrote Jack's point of view (who are you kidding, O'Neill, everyone knows you miss going offworld). Please keep up the great work!

All I have to say is... GO T!

That was fun,thanks!

Epic win! Hehe, I love this fic3 A little dissapointed that Daniel didn't get a cooler battle since he's my fav character, but the one he was very Daniel-esque, the type of thing you'd expect him to get involved in.

Totally adding this to my favs now!

This is just so jack!

Absolutely hilarious!

Somehow Walter always seems a little bit like a butler... a cute butler.

Yeah, I found this from Jackwabbit's faves too. Good work!

I found your story in JackWabbit's favorites and I'm going to add to mines as well. I so love the way o'Neil talks with "ah" and the scene is really easy to picture. Those few lines are brilliant:

(...) Walter smiles and says "Missing offworld travel, sir?"

Jack fixes him with a very serious stare and says "I don't know what you're talking about, Walter."

"Of course not, sir. (...)"

Hehehe. Funny. Love the humour.

I always hated (still do) the fact that they took Jack off the team, and then the show. :) I'm forced into only reading FanFictions to hear anything interesting with him in it.

Not that I mind though, expicially when the fics are as fun as this one. It would be cool if you ever did an actual story about what happened to them, but this was fun none the less.

Good work. :)

Funny!

I loved this little ficlet - great little read.

Cheers

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I love that Walter caught on to his sigh.

LMAO! ah such humor!

this has some of the best dialogue ever!

i find this most exellent!

thankyou for making me smile!

:) ~Del