Oh, I hope you continue this! This story is excellent! Keep up the great work!

WOW. One of if not THE best fic i'v ever read! Fantabulistic! PLEAS UPDATE

Interestingly enough it looks like for Elizabeth to stay IC in Sparrabeth fics she needs to be married to Will. Which is truly quite discouraging. I swear every time dear Lizzie breaks into oceans of tears for no particularly good reason other than that she can't make up her mind, is so sorry for killing Jack or is just so irritatingly a damsel-in-distress, I feel like banging my head against the nearest wall. In pre-DMC fics it might be understandable but post-AWE? Although I find movie!Liz slightly annoying at times (well she did marry William and then we got a Disney!ending... -gags-), she's a strong character and doesn't quite strike me as the headless-chicken-in-distress type.

Gah. Now I went off an a rant. None of this was directed at you, dear author, whose story I find very refreshing - you actually made me like Will I! Plus you get bonus points (or rum cookies xD) for managing to keep Jack IC as well. -feels another rant coming on, quickly changes topic- Hm, ha! The plot thickens with stuck-up Spaniard wannabe pirates whose nefarious plot is, no doubt, doomed to fail after much angsting and misunderstanding on all sides, and mayhaps a (s)peck of adventure. I wonder how they got in the house unnoticed though, and are all the fine gentlemen in the nearby garrison hiding in the cellar? Which, come to think of it, wouldn't be surprising at all.

D:

But...you can't leave me at a cliffhanger! It...it's too good! Too awesome! Too epic! How am I supposed to live with an update hanging over my head! HOW? The suspense! It burns! DX

Ye cliffhangers! They burn!

Wow...That was amazing! My computer finally let me see one of your stories, and it's just amazing!

hi there

i just wanted to say that i love your story! i have been reading it for some time now and i am really enjoying it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

AGH! Im dying here! Very good story! PLEASE UPDATE!

Great story!

Oh, I knew it was all Will's fault! Everything is always Will's fault, this way or another lol

I held my breath while reading this chapter and I was reading it so fast I think I will have to go back and read it again

It was fantastic! And the story line keeps catching me off guard. It's getting more and more intriguing! I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope that you will update really, really, REALLY soon! :)

OH You updated! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Great chapter! They're both so stubborn, they really should stop shying away from each other AT LAST I love how complex their scenes in your stories always are. All those conflicting emotions, motivations running through their heads, through their hearts...

It's good but who's Will's father?

Great to see another update!

Nice twist to the plot -poor young Will getting caught in the middle.

Very exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Cheers!

Nytd

Oh my god, it's getting more and more exciting!

So now we've got another issue arising. Someone wants immortality, through the chest.

Well, to be honest, I never really saw that twist coming. But it makes for a good idea, definately. I'm surprised I didn't think of that myself.

Okay then, we shall see where this goes. I'm really excited to see what's next.

Really good chapter!

Quite the cliffhanger! I hope you update again soon, this is getting really interesting...