Reviews for My First Vacation
Smarthiz chapter 16 . 4/21/2016
xD i think the last chapter is much better than the previous ones :)
i'd love it if youkeptthis story going :)
also to have more grimmichi interractions D:D
candykitty01 chapter 11 . 9/2/2015
I laughed SO hard when I got to the Super Extra Ridiculously Intense Epic Slow Mo Squared View Divided by Grimm's facial expression and the eyes and how they were dragged was SO funny, I had to reread it multiple times, take a picture, and send it to my friends over skype.I still couldn't figure out why i laughed almost to the point of not breathing XD
winddemon199 chapter 11 . 8/10/2014
I can't stop laughing at Imagining Grimmjow's face.
bitchlovescanons chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
are u gay?l:l
AkakuHana chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
LMFAO! OMFG! God! you have got to finish this, it is so damn hilarious! I realy look forward to the next chapter!LAWL Cant get over the babies XD
azul renge chapter 9 . 6/16/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHA! and ulquiorra's so BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

u r freakin' amazing! really amazing! crazy amazing!

i luve u for writing this! great story line!
azul renge chapter 7 . 6/16/2012
i really love the way u write A2345678910JQK !
azul renge chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
this chapter was good!

but,just...i don't think ishida and ichigo would have a conversation like that.
azul renge chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
''are you high?'' seriously? that was so HILARIOUS! and grimmjow throwing paper balls at ulquiorra's just plain funny! can't wait to read job!
Shuhei69 chapter 16 . 3/28/2012
Wow an interesting story so far. I read everything tonight and it has been good, although it can use a little more improvement. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapter. Oh my god, I forgot to add the part about the kids. Kids are evil creatures and I am not sure if the kids are messing with them or they actually are spiritually aware of what the Espada are. Guess I'll have to wait and find out.
demoncookie8D chapter 16 . 3/27/2012
I love this story so much Demented baby was a noce touch, if not a bit creepy. I can't wait for the next chapter Good luck!
NotSoMajestic chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I have to say, I love this fanfic. I also drew a sort-of fanart as well: art/Ulquiorra-AU-286219702
zip chapter 16 . 2/4/2012
this is so very excellent, love it. thank you!
Night13 chapter 16 . 1/19/2012
Dang that's kinda scary in a way, what with babys/children looking all innocent ;)
Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 16 . 1/19/2012
best descritpion ever
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