Awwwwwwww...IT'S ADORABLE! I have NEVER seen this pairing in my life, and you make me fall in love with them with one story. I LOVE this story!

D You made me fall in love with this story. And we won't mention the pairing.

x33 That was pure awesome.

This looks like a really odd "crack" pairing...with both Mizuki and Tomoka being opposites in personality. I can't really see Tomoka being with any guy since she usually "fangirls" over Ryoma, which could get anoy just about anybody. xD Well...I guess Tomoka does need a guy (like Mizuki) who can deal with her loud ramblings and is patient enough to listen. Great move on his part in keeping her quiet.

Aw, I won't hurt you! Obviously, this is the first I've seen of this couple, but I like it, kind of! Tomoka gets on my nerves, but she's honestly the only female character I like. It's because she has flaws, and isn't afraid to show them. I like that about her.

And then Mizuki is so careful and quiet and smart. But then Fuji ruined him. And now he's so obsessive compulsive about everything and I just adore that. Yes, new fave pair!

It's so cute! I love how short it is. Fits, for some reason. it's short and sweet and not long-winding. I like it. :)

U kno...I think they deserve each other.

Actually, scratch that. No one deserves Tomoka. Or Mizuki.

Am I being too harsh?

You know what, you should be punished for writing this... Yes, a sequel! Nah, just kidding. I love crack couples, especially short stories with those unusual ones. It's easier to understand why authors wrote it that way, cause there's not much to say when they aren't canon. Tomoka always amuses me, but pairing her with Mizuki.. You're a Genius!

HAHA this was cute! Love.

Cute :) LOL