crashing in to each other please im still waiting

continue please

i like your story very much and hope you update soon again :D
it would be such a waste if the story gets forgotten ,

lg dark reika

...Crash!

Ahem, I mean, whatever you think is best...

i think this is pretty well done so far. stretch the confusion just for aleast one more ch (not the whole ch) would be good, like having a sence of suspence. so keep it up your doing real great so far! :D

hmmm... pretty good... Poor Aerrow... doesn't have a clue on what's going on...

I am really enjoying this story. Please do update soon my dear. I am absolutely reveling in Dark Ace's peversion. Aerrow is quite the looker from Ic an gather. Please do try to lengthen these chapters please. I love scrolling through words until the end. This sory is taking a wonderful turn. Keep it up.

Hmm well this story seems interesting.

I love it that DA is a complete pervert xD

These chapters are far too short for my liking, as you seem to

get into the chapter you're writing or that you could continue

writing the chapter really well and for ages but then suddenly

cut it off. So I would love to see this story with longer chapters

but obviously you're comfortable with the length..

Ah but that's what I think I'm not having a go or anything

Hmm to drag or to crash them together..?

I'm liking the build up with them so far so maybe drag it out a bit

and Then make them crash suddenly xD that could be interesting

or really hard to write lol

I'm helpul xD

i'm enjoying this story so far so please update son~

Keep up the Wicked Writing

xMoonlitx

Hmm... Drag it out, or Rush it...?

You may be slow to post, but I think you might want to take your time with this one.

Aerrow could be having strange dreams about the Dark Ace trying to help him, and then waking up safe with his friends?

That's one way to drag it.

But then, I have a preference for /longer/ well writen stories.

And this one ain't too bad.

I like this story either way. Go with your instinct! I can't wait for the next update!

This is such a fun story I can't keep from laughing, I too wanna see 'em crash.

I like the crashing into each other one better.

omg such a good story! continue!or, well, update please!

lol... hey! 40th preview x3

You so have to continue this story. I was like, laughing my head off and it's really awesome.