Damn. I just want to say that I originally clicked on this story because the summary intrigued me, but once I started reading I wasn’t sure if it was something I’d like...except I couldn’t stop reading. Very captivating. And there were a few times I muttered “you are so twisted...I LOVE it!” Lol. :) Good story. Nice AU. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Interesting and we'll crafted alternate story. Held my attention to the end and usually these types of stories don't. so kudos to your story.

This is the first longer Stargate fanfic I've read and I just loved it! Your sense of detail and how you made these characters (albeit altered in this AU) come alive made me "see" the whole thing. Love Carson's dimples...

Thanks for writing and sharing :-)

I just finished reading this for the third time. That's how much I like this story - very well written, with well fleshed out characters, and a story that is gripping and well told. Thanks.

okay hippocratic batman in white is the best line ever! loving this story.

Hmm, how to review? Apparently I never did the first time I read this, but then, for awhile I didn't bother to do so for any stories. Now I try to remember to review a story at the very end at least.

So, yes, you may wonder if this story stood up to a second reading? HELL yes! Loved John as a jaguar. The whole idea of Pretenders is fun/interesting. Except maybe for the vampires, which would be creepy/interesting. ;) Michael was a very interesting twist. Hope his soul was somehow cleansed by the fire. And much as I despise Keller in the series, here you wrote her in such a way that I actually kinda liked her.

Onward to a rereading of the rest of the Untamed series...

"My ancestors were once worshipped as gods," he breathed.

Just wanted to point out how much I loved this line. A nice twist on the joke "Cats were once worshipped as gods, and have never forgotten it."

Alright, I saw where Onca came from, but I only just realized that Nahuel means "tiger" in one of the local languages in Chile and Argentina. Thanks Wikipedia. XD I always wondered what that meant, but for some reason never looked it up. At least, I assume that's the reference you meant, unless there's another one.

Wow. Maybe Michael explains a bit of Kolya's bitterness. Love the tie-in of all the characters, and the Athosian Clan.

Freedom! Hmmm wonder if they'll let the vampire out too? Where's Teeeyyyylllaaaa?

I love this story...so far ;) don't hurt John. I can't wait for Teyla either!

Well, I was looking for White Collar fic and found this instead. Outstanding AU, I loved it. You've done an outstanding job capturing everybody's voice in this completely believable different world.

Huh. And to think of all the time I've wasted calling you Chewie, when I should have been calling you Shrek. Damn.

ROFLMAOOL! ICB!

Finally finished reading through this (i've been reading it all day!). & i have to say, i've loved every moment of it. Tis a brilliant piece of writing: clever, funny, painful/sad, , . Completely gorgeous writing.

Hee hee, all finished! I loved it, well done my dear! )

Hello!

Now, let me tell ya - AU is totally not my thing but OMG, I'm hooked! Loving it so much, reading it every spare second I get )

I can't work out what's better - the chapters or the funny author's notes at the beginning and end...

Awesome work! Xxx