aww! that was buetiful!

i luved it! write more Jordan fics!

-emo

you know, i don't get it, Jordan is one of the best characters in the show, and yet, this is the first fic i have come across that focuses on her. and i'm glad that it is, because this is totally awesome. i absolutely loved it. major kudos.

It's rare to see a Jordan-centric fic, but I liked this. I think this was definitely my favorite line: "So he’ll prove he loves her or move on. And he proves it every time."

Nice job with this.

Wow, that was sad, but I don't think Dr. Cox ever loved Carla. Maybe liked her but I think she kinda reminded him of Jordan because, well, they are both bossy. Really bossy. Ha. Anyways, great job! :)

Angelica

Wow, wow, wow! I loved it! Jordan is my favorite character on Scrubs and I love seeing insight into her character. And you write her very, very well. I'm so glad I found this fic. I'm going to add it to my faves right now!

I must say that this is amazing and very Jordan. Three thumbs up!

This was AMAZINGLY great. You have fantastic Jordan-voice/insight, and I hope you continue to write her. I love that you tackle her depression. It's so easy to see her bitchy moments as two dimensional or light hearted bitchiness and her depression is not dealt with enough. It's something I've wondered about since it was mentioned on the show. Since she can be quite sweet and then range to quite cold, I think it's definitely rooted in that. Loved the exploration of the feelings of inadequacy. She is so totally vulerable under the front she puts up. Loved this line: "She loves him. She loves Perry Cox more than she has ever loved anything in her life. Yet she torments him, ruins him, tries so hard to mess everything up between them. So he’ll prove he loves her or move on. And he proves it every time." Such a perfect capturing of their relationship. Oddly beautiful. Like I say, I hope you continue to write Jordan. I'd love to see you write a Jordan/Perry fic too. This was really great; she felt so real. Realer than she does on the show sometimes with her quips and one liners.

Good charecterization of the characters. Great job on the story. It was very nice.

That was really, really, really, really great! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

is great. And very IC. There arant enough Jordon fics. :)

Aw, I feel bad for Jordan. Good little oneshot. Really well written. You don't make Jordon seem too pathetic (probably not the word I'm looking for) and you keep her in character. Well done. :)

Happy New Year! Oh cool, this is my first review of 2008. :) Sweet.

Nice analysis of Jordan's psyche. I like how you expose her fears without making it all mushy and out of character for her.