Those final four words, mate, those final four *shit-eating grin*

that was a good story!

awwwww

Verry... NICE.
I don't quite know how to describe it for calling it "awesome" and "amazing" would be too typical and general. Thought they are adjectives to modify this story. :)

Umm... I loved the idea of writing it in one-liners 'coz every line sends me a flux of... I don't know that feeling... we call it "kilig" in our country. Well, it's you know. The feeling when you reeeaally feel the love. Ugh. Pardon my inability to say it.

Sasuke is really Sasuke here and same goes for his girlfriend (oh I love the sound of that). Especially the "Are you going to kiss me now?-Yeah, so shut up" part ;)

I love one-shots that give a great impact to readers, and this does exactly that. ;) Keep writing sister! :*

Kyaaaaaa! I'm feeling very giddy too! Haha

Such a sweet story! Sasuke and Sakura are the cutest couple ever! (:

This was very good!

FLUFF! I love it! :

NR

I think I kno wat happened in the end Hehe

Mm, nice oneshot :)

Hey, um, if you don't mind, may I take the basic concept and make a oneshot of my own based off of this?

basically the "Sasuke is after Sakura because of the chase" :) I won't copy the storyline, I swear, and if I end up doing so, I'll hit myself in the face and not post. xD

Idk if mine is gonna be the tragic or happy route, so yeah...

may I have your permission?

thanks~

~Mistyfire

I friggin' love this story! I watched that episode of Grey's Anatomy and loved it. But I loved this fanfic more than the episode!

Hahaha wow. At least she didn't fully give in! :P

I read the same lines somewhere else?

I'm trying to find the story,

but there was a story with the same lines

("It's not the chase, it's your ineffectual fists...etc")

...Is it plagiarism? O_o

I swear I didn't read this story before,

and I swear it was different

In that story I think, he proposed to her after telling her

ANYWAYS -

aw, I love these stories

where Sasuke does something OOC

and Sakura thinks he's playing with her

and it gets all emotional.

xD

Aw...so cute! :)

Oh so sweet!