You know, hon. You're a really great writer. Have you tried writing your original story? I'm sure it will be good. Keep on writing!

Loved this fanfic! It took me two sittings to read through the whole thing and there wasn't a moment where I felt like skipping any parts or feeling bored. I think it's my favourite Beyblade fanfic I've seen on this site so far. You are a great writer! The ending was amazing and clever.

tyson is bad. poor hilary
Update soon, please

OMG.. This is the first time I've read a real KaixHil beyblade story! I simply love this! The way you have written all the scenes, and the whole plot, is just unbelievable.. :) I'm in love with this! Just wow! So happy to read this,. and I really hope that I read more stories from you. :)

Okay I felt like reading a Beyblade fic and its hard to find a good one so I've decided to read this for the second time. I LOVED it last time and it's been one of my favorite's ever since. The best Beyblade fic I've ever read in fact! Recently I've fallen in love with Star Wars so I hope that'll make the 'Rebellion' even more noble and appealing to me this time around. I think I'll have a lot of fun reading it again. If I already reviewed some chapter then I'm just gonna leave an anonymous one with the same username.

Hmm learning something from a Master of deception and manipulation is something to be quite proud of. I love Hilary's independence and spirit!

this story is awesome i think that you should do a sequel to this it'll be good and keep it up i like your stories! :)

Hay there,

This story was so beautifully and skilfully written that I find myself left wanting. I want to read more, even though it was neatly wrapped and provided the perfect closure.

This has been one of the very few stories in which I have actually craved the next chapter, yet forced brief periods of separation just so it would last longer and leave a deeper effect in my mind.

I have to give you my highest commendations!

A truly fantastic piece of art!

xx

Once again; oh my god! Oh my fucking God! I was so thinking he was still alive but when you said he was dead it was so unexpected. Then you reviled he wasn't and I was so shocked. Still no matter what you did I absolutely LOVE the ending. Wow. That first look in the square seems like such a long time ago. The effects of a great story and an even greater authoress. Please recommend me to any other stories you have written.

Oh my god. Oh my fucking God! I'm so sadistic. Thanks a lot for letting them get caught. I can't wait for what he's gonna do to Hilary. I hope he doesn't kill everyone in the Resistance, just keep them as pets instead. The dark times are the most enjoyable. Just like in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows when you lose all hope things miraculously happen. "I can fuck the brains out of the woman you love whenever I want, however I want. I'll spare a thought for you when I ravage her again and again and again. Then I'll do it ever harder." is the cruelset sentence in this story. Mega props. I really wish there was a tragic ending for this but seeing as the category isn't angst I don't suppose it ends that way.

holy crap... after withdrawing from reading fanfictions (especially in Kai/Hil category), I'm extremely surprised that this one was able to make me pull an all nighter.

I simply love the plot. It wasn't without the cliches and predictabilities, but it was brilliant! I love how you dare sacrifice some crucial characters to make the pain and struggle more realistic and evident.

And even though I don't believe in star-crossed lovers (Romeo and Juliet are a tad over-rated), you made Kai and Hilary's relationship believable, especially because you pointed out the insanity/obsession/twistedness involved in the love triangle.

I love it! This story just made my day after finishing a torturing design project :D

Will you post the alternative ending? I'd like to read it :)

that was such a sweet ending! man im still upset mariah died! ah post the alternate ending, but it involves another i dont want it! ahaha!

man cant believe its over? i remember you saying you didnt really have anything in the works?

i havent updated in a while, cos ive hit a major writers block! awful!

good story man! )

omg...u made me think that kai was dead. i was about to cry..but yay he lived. does this mean its the end? i loved the chapter by the way

buen trabajo

good job,

I like your writing style

O-O...WOW! i am confused...yet not. Kai the Resistance Leader is dead...but he's alive! SO ROMANTIC! Love it!

Great Ending. For a moment I thought Kai was dead. Glad that he's alive. You should write an would be a perfect happy ending. Plz start a new KaiHil fic. I will simply miss u if u retired so soon. LOL