When I read stories like these, I wish it was fan fiction authors who wrote Death Note. It really could have had a more satisfying ending than what we saw...and L would still be alive, with Light by his side as his genius partner.

I love how you built the scenario of them looking into where L may have stayed and the boys figuring out that he ACTUALLY built a freakin high rise.

interesting, so light never gets his memories back and is TECHNICALLY innocent. so there's no need for a trial. loved the way it ended and everything else about the plot. like. just everything. can't give details more than that. just loved it. keep up the good work and i hope to see another story as good. no as awesome as this one was. D

Wonderful story! Ty. :)

Brilliant, loved it.

I don't know why, considering that this is like the fourth time I've read this, but I suddenly got the urge to write that Near flashback that he had with L. xD Do I have your permission to do so? (considering that it'll be in your universe and I'm stealing the dialogue and actions already put in the semi-flashback is why I'm asking in the first place)

I always can't help but come back to this DN fanfic. It's just so well written and amazing. 3 Thanks for writing this!

hate near.

Oh my barney...

This is so beautiful.

I wish Death Note had ended this way instead.

;~;

Great story!

You should make a sequel-it was really interesting.

lol

Nears natural teddy bear factor

Gah. You should definitely make an actual sequel to this. It was good and I need something to read...

but yeah. Awesome fic.

~Annie

ah cute! Seriously, that waa such a nice ending! Being a fan of V for vendetta, I'm off to go read your crossover! Thanks for the excellent read :)

“You might need to arrest me for theft, unfortunately,” Near admits sadly, “for credit card theft and fraud and exploitation of teddy bears.”

“No,” says Mello, “Near, he’s not going to arrest you. You were so cool. And you weren’t exploiting teddy bears, you were acknowledging your own natural teddy bear factor and, um, utilizing opportunities to the fullest and using your entire potential. And Matt...” he shoves him with his elbow, “Took care of us and got us here.”

You have no idea how much this little section got to me... seriously. I love the way you write! I think you're gonna go into my favourite author's list xD

hah, I love how they're starting to get along xD

Near is too adorable :)

ha, I love this fic! Its going in my favourites, and theres parts of every chapter so far that have just made me "lol" or "aww" xDD

For this chapter it was the beginning. Thanks for the read :)