real sweet story...*Sniffle*

That was really cute :3

Aw, so cute! I think it's great! I really enjoyed it :D Thank you!

i cant believe that i didn't read this one cuz it's soo good!thanks so much for writing! it was cute

E~! More, more! This was so cute- please write more!

Aw, cute. Maya is pretty dense from time to time, and you portrayed their characters pretty well. Nicely done. :D

That was sweet, and even though I'm more partial to Phoenix x Iris myself, I still enjoyed reading yuor fic. I liked all the details you put in, from Pearl's letter to Santa to the "Haha suckers, it's Christmas!" to Maya's letter and the mention of the famous Bridge incident. One thing, though: I'd check more carefully next time for punctuation mistakes, like missing commas and the like. Keep up the good work!

Okay, here's the thing: I liked most of it. What I didn't like is probably more my personal taste in style. I do, however, have one very large complaint.

It seems like all of a sudden Phoenix says "oh yeah, I totally love you Maya, even though just a few hours ago I was headed off to see Iris!"

I'm not sure how you could fix this aside from the obvious half-solutions that would need to be thought out more, but I thought I should point it out.

Anyway... I liked the idea but I'm not sure it was carried out convincingly. I mean, I was just reading for the heck of it, and for the heck of it it was entertaining, but I don't think it was incredibly realistic.

I do like the way you portray Phoenix though, when he realizes he forgot to get presents. Although, damn, now I have to point out another logical hole:

he only goes to get a present for Maya (in the story I don't think it mentioned him looking for anything for Pearls). Also, he dashes out of the house without getting Pearls' letter, so he'd have no way of knowing what she wanted anyway.

By the way, I thought that you wrote Pearls very well.

(And I call her Pearls, too... I know what her actual name is. _)

That was SO CUTE! And sweet. It makes me want to SQUEE

That was incredibly cute. Great holiday fic!

WOW that left me blown away! Well-written, and I enjoyed the kiss.

"Haha suckers, it's Christmas!" LOL I laughed so HARD!

Wright on!

That was so cute!

Just what I was looking for.

Bye,

Nyrihaz

Okay, FIRST.

I loled SO FREAKIN' HARD at the "HAHA Suckers! It's Christmas!"

That made me laugh forever!

And at the end, with the Phoenix calling and the I LOVE YOU!

Well, I LOVE THIS FIC!

Great Job!

great story, you sure do know how to spread the holiday cheers to everyone.