I CAN IMAGINE GIRL LANCE GUY LOTOR AND GIRL KEITH
LOTOR AS RILEY LANCE JASMINE KEITH AS HUEY

I loved this story. Omg Riley is a perve and Huey know he was looking too.

Wow I don't think Huey would be a rape apologist

oooooooooooooooooo... Huey wants to look up Jazmines skirt too! ;D

I LOVE IT :)

This is toooooo cute...you know minus the attempted-rape part...still loved it

Oh my god, this was a lovely story! Even though what Riley did was awful, I can definitely see him doing something like that -_- Huey and Jazmine were really cute with each other, and I love how sheltered Jazmine was, to be afraid of getting pregnant from that XD I hope Huey gave Riley a good beating afterwards lol

ROFL,now THAT was funny, good job, wait no... GREAT job! haha, huey thought sshe looked good in that skirt lol!

He suddenly stopped and dropped down onto his back, "Oops. Outta fuel,"

For some reson that part made me crack up so much. I really liked this story, I think it's so cute how Huey cares about Jazmine .

that was really funny!

"I only meant there are uglier girls than you in the world, okay?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(x10)

AH i loved this! Ur like, one of the best writers UP here. Good job! :D

-Kelsey

(Huey & Jazmine) forever! so fuck off if u dont like OK!_

This is funny, sad, and cute at the same time. :)

No offense, but I liked this story a lot better than the sequel. I like stories where they are still too young to engange in sexual actions (like in the sequel with Huey and Jazmine in chapter 3). I also like the fanfics where Jazmine is chasing after Huey, but he is oblivious to this. I'm in no way expecting you to change your style of writing, but if you are going to, try and tone down the sex.

It was good. Good job.