| Reviews for A Pretense of Romance: Mature Version |
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formerly known as Anonyma chapter 5 . 10/6/2018 I didn't know how much I needed the combination of Stargate and the fake dating trope... But then again, I love when these stories walk the line between a somewhat ridiculous premise and earnest emotions. Thank you lots for writing and sharing! |
Sailor's Wife chapter 1 . 3/2/2015 Your Sam/Daniel stories have always been my favorites! |
Princess Peridot chapter 5 . 7/2/2013 AWWWWWW that was so sweet! Please write more. |
faint-of-hart chapter 5 . 11/13/2011 LOVED IT! even though its a few years old HIGH FIVE!3 |
AnFan-n-More chapter 5 . 1/16/2011 This was a nice little vignette. It was a good method for getting the two of them together even though there were feelings between Sam and Jack. I like how you handled the building of the tension and the crisis. I was a little disappointed that things turned physical so quickly, but the incredible tension that Daniel was under and the realization that Sam went through could make it believable. There was something missing though. I think it was a feeling that the romance was floating out in the middle of nowhere without a plot to support it. Or, it could be that everything fell together so quickly. You did note that the relationship was developing below conscious level for a while though, so it was explained away. |
EccentricRage chapter 5 . 1/9/2011 awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i loved this story! so cute and full of fuzzy feeling-ness. so amazing! |
Saiyuri007 chapter 5 . 10/15/2010 I am thourghly impressed with the writing you have done. I have now read two of your stories and I am amazed by the detail you include in your writing. From the eye color to the attitudes of the characters. You maintain thier identies with an added flair all your own. Please keep on writing. After a long day, or a day full of horrible events. I know that I can go pull up one of your amazing stories and feel better. Thanks so much. Heather |
funkichooki chapter 5 . 5/21/2009 That was a very enjoyable read. Thankyou. |
pstibbons chapter 5 . 4/19/2009 Still good on the second read. |
LunaFae chapter 5 . 12/31/2008 Omg i absolutly loved it :) Such a heartwarming story, YEAH go sam and daniel... their so hott xD ! Thanks for a lovely read |
WildKain chapter 5 . 9/25/2008 Way to go! I read this straight through. It was kinda weird reading the love scene. I never pictured them quite that way. And its good that Jack and Sara reunited. Perhaps children are in thier future. Can't wait for more. |
RDF-73 chapter 5 . 4/30/2008 Very nice story to the best show on TV as far as I am concern. |
Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 5 . 2/5/2008 Firstly, I'd like to apologise for instantly asking you about 'Meridian' the last time I reviewed this thing; it was just because of your initial references to the events of '2001' that I even thought about it in the first place (You mention Season Five and Sam/Daniel, I automatically think of 'Meridian'; mention Sam/Daniel in an earlier season and it's not as prominent in my mind). With that said, I'd like to say that you've once again created an EXCELLENT Sam/Daniel pairing. As with 'Alliance of the Heart'- the story that actually got me interested in the idea of Sam and Daniel as a couple in the first place-, you perfectly capture the emotional tension that makes the two of them such an excellent couple to write for, expertly describing Daniel's grief as he believes he's fallen in love with a woman that will never love him and Sam's uncertainty about her own feelings for him in return. To put it simply, when you read the angst in this story, it's enough to make you cry, and when you read the love, you can really FEEL what they feel. I particularly liked Jack's conversations with Sam and Daniel in the fourth chapter as he confronted the two of them about their feelings for each other; as always, Daniel's trying to do what he thinks is best even if it means he ends up getting another serious kick in the face. There may be times when you want to strangle the guy for not taking a few more chances to get what he wants, but you can't deny he's a good man whatever else happens. Oh, and, least I forget, I also liked how, after Sam had revealed the truth behind her and Daniel's reasons for starting the relationship, it was Teal'c- good old Teal'c, cutting through the crap to just say how he feels about the situation- who really got Sam thinking about how she feels about Daniel. Like the staff weapons he's used for most of the series, Teal'c is, as always, direct and to the point, and it DEFINITELY pays off. Keep up the good work! |
DementedLeaf chapter 5 . 1/14/2008 Aww :) Nice. |
Transgenic-girl chapter 5 . 1/10/2008 *chokes up* Literally. I loved this! |