This is a real interesting story. I like it.

hey what happened? why did you stop?:/ please update its was going so good!

Why so many authors suddenly stop their stories without explanation will always be a mystery to me.

*reads the last line*
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Plz update :-)

please finish!

Wait, WTF?!

Your story is awesome! I love the plot line and how it's a companion story is Ethereal. This is probably one of the best Ikarishipping fics I've read. Please update! I want to keep reading so badly!

Wow, the first chapter and I'm already hooked! :)

Good job with the writing!

loves it :D

Is he lying? He must be lying. Great. Now she thinks that guy is the guy who saved her and gave her money. And now I'm acting like I'm watching a Soap Opra. :-/ I'm pathetic! May the real Shinji WIN! Crush the other guy!

My name says it all... I'm a girl so now I am NEVER gonna bathe in a lake, or river or whatever the case may be.

I like the plot, its very addicting. I don't think your grammar was that bad (Ask the people on Serebii, they know I'm a grammar freak) And the characters are decently simaler to the characters in the TV show, but you can't write a fanfic like this without a 'lil OOC.

I have only 1 word 2 say:'Woah'. Seriously, woah. This is definately going 2 my favourites. Although it suprised me that Mesprit would give her[I'm 95% sure it's a 'her'.]powers willingly 2 Shinji. I really hope you don't give up on this series it's really good!. Supporting you all the way!D

AWESOME STORY

i only started reading this recently and it is already awesome :DD

plz do continue the story

and why mespirit join Shinji! wasnt it supposed to join Hikari?

I loved it! But I still don't get why Shinji wants to kill her. But I still loved it. can't wait til the next one