AW that was so adorable

I love their compromise.

The last line shows that Danny is beginning to come out of his depression; he can actually think of something and someone else beside himself. It's the first step in the right direction.

"Before joining her in slumber, he had one final thought.

She’s gonna flip, when she wakes up and sees this mess."

Aw! she did a Danny! lol! nice role reversal! :)

This is a fantastic story! Great work!

You write emotion/ angst so well. I loved this take on the aftermath of Child's Play. Lindsay's txt message was so true and then you lighten the ending perfectly to show the ligtening of Danny's emotions now he knows he has someone wanting to stand next to him and help.

I found myself very engrossed in this story from the get-go. The first line really painted a clear picture of where Danny is at (emotionally, physically, and mentally) post-Child's Play. You are really an intelligent yet perceptive writer. Being able to combine so many elements and emotions together in a fic like this isn't easy, but you pull it off beautifully.

“Death ends a life, not a relationship”...

My favorite line. Perceptive analogy. I also loved the last line as I thought it brought a nice touch of humor to an emotional story. Well Done.

~Auda~ :D

LOVE IT!

danny and lindsay's reactions are spot on! exactly like they would be!

the ending is so sweet and you really protrayed danny's regret adn guilty feelings very well.

and i absolutly love the last line "She gonna flip, when she wakes up and sees this mess." it's so danny and so true!

amazing story!

Wow. Danny practically losing it and then Lindsay being a mess. Very good story, showing the depth of each character. :)

Great fic. The aftermath to this whole thing for Danny was very realistically written.

Wonderful, perfect, love it! Perfect mix of angst and cuteness :-) You do know how to write them.

Thank you.

Aw! Ok, yeah ya made me cry but you also made me laugh which is awesome! Hehehe, I had to laugh at that comment about Flack saying that Danny was "destroying his liver in peace". Hm does Danny have a survey for that too I wonder? Hehehe:) And then Danny's comment at the very end was cute and funny too. Love the fic, as usual!

Oh I just loved this! You did a great job at painting the pained emotions of our couple. This obviously was affected Danny but I loved how you showed how it also affected Lindsay and especially how everyone at worked reacted. I could picture every word you wrote. Great mix of angst with a little humour at the end :)

Such a great start... I can not wait to read more...

JENNIFER

I've yet to see the episode but you've done a good job with relaying the events so that I can follow the one-shot.

I can completely believe that Danny's guilt and Lindsay's past brought them to a stalemate in dealing with a child's death.

I thought the text 'Death does not mean the end of relationship' could apply both to Danny's relationship to the little boy and to his relationship with Lindsay.

I love the ending line. And when she does, then we all know that things are back to normal.

PS I got a notice for a 2nd chapter but cannot access it. Is there a 2nd chapter?

Aww! I loved that story! And you were right, that last line was hilarious!

You know what? Reading this made me feel much better after a shitty day. I think I can finally go to sleep now and not feel like total crap, even tho I still feel like puking my guts out from too many pastries. LoL.

Oh, wait... I think I'd better go do that right now... I feel AWFUL!

But, as I said, this was an absolutely wonderful little fic, and I wish I had the drive to get up and write my own shit, but damn seasonal depression... I hate the winter, doesn't matter how beautiful the snow looks outside my window.

Thanks for sharing!

Luv ya always,

-DK