Ok, so, i know you haven't updated this in 5 years buuuut... this story is so amazing, just reread it and i really want a continuation!

I'M BEGGING YOU TO FINISH THIS IS GODDAMN AMAZING

Pleeease continue! This is a really great story!

Thankyou for this story and I hope that you can finish it at some point. Also I just have to say, I like your writhing style and all other thing in this fic over all. So thank again for this.

Finish the story

(they only allow one review per chapter, so I'm on this chapter to send a thumbs up and hopeful eyes your way _) You know, I've been following this story for the past few years, and I mean it when I say I randomly come back throughout the years to reread it, because I love it that much! Truly, the way you write your chapters are amazing and the bond you vividly create between Roy and Ed is perfect. It saddens me so much to not have more to read- but I still love it so much! I hope you are able one day to continue because this is truly my favorite FMA story I've read in all my years reading. I cling to the hope that it might continue one day, and until then, I'll keep rereading it to quench my craving!

its been 3 yrs will u update?

Please update!

Awww...I was so excited to finish this story! I love what you've already got, you should finish it! I think you should just finish writing the whole thing in a word document, then go back and rework the parts you don't like, rather than postponing the whole thing until you rewrite what you've already got. That's just my opinion though, cuz that's what I have to do with my ADHD brain in order to finish anything that I start... Otherwise I'm just too much of a perfectionist and I lose motivation. But whatever you choose to do with this, I just want to say that I LOVE what you've got. This is one of my favorite Parental RoyEd fanfics that I've read (even though it's not done yet). I love the way their relationship is developing! Great storyline, great detail and description. I really like the way you write. :)

Shui is a brat. He hates Ed for things that Edward can't control. Not to mention that the people have no right to treat Ed the way they do. But Shui just made me angry. I was all like, 'You hate him for sleeping while Roy suffers, even though he's suffered just as much if not more since the fucking train wreck and even before that. You hate him for being different, even though he has no control over that?' I loathe people like that. They come up with silly reasons to hate somebody for absolutely no reason other than the fact that they're different. Not to mention, Roy treats him so damn nicely instead of sticking up for Ed and saying how wrong Shui was to hate him. *Sigh* This is more Parental Roy/OC, considering how nice he's treating Shui.

Can't wait for more, I'm loving it so far!

So you gonna keep AT IT OR WHAT? Pleaaaase I love this!

First chapter read: Good so far! Looking forward to reading the rest.

I hope you are close to finishing this story because I thoroughly enjoyed the chapters posted already. Man I just found this story the other day and I want more of it I can't imagine those years gaps!

i have read over 100 FMA fanfics...and honestly...THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST! EVER!

which is why i got so sad after reading you haven't finished it yet :'[

please finish it!

its hard to find such great EdRoy storys, (coz must of them are romances...and i won't read those)

even if its just a quick wrap-up of Riza Al and the rest of the party finding Ed and Roy...i just really want an ending :[

i don't mean to sound like im begging X[ ...but its just really sad that a great story gos un-finished.

-ZeyTheFox-