ZOMG! Great story! Loved the ending! Can you tell me who the song on the last chapter is by?

First off I would like to say that I’m NOT trying to insult you with this review. This story was really good, but there are a few points I would like to make:

1) Some spelling and grammar mistakes (like ‘thru’ instead of ‘through’ and ‘with out’ instead of ‘without’ etc.)

2)You should be careful with OCs in fanfics. Yoru’s not a bad character, but she’s the one doing everything and the ‘main’ characters are given a sort of backseat. OCs can work fine as catalysts, but Yoru became an omniscient main character and sorted everyone’s problems for them and understood exactly where they were coming from, instead of letting them sort their own feelings/issues.

3) Where did you get the Finnish translation for 'aatto'? It actually means 'eve.'

I really hope I didn’t come across as bitchy, because that was not my intent. I just wanted to point this stuff out to you. Once again, I meant no offence by this review, the whole fic was written really well and the plot was good!

omg! that was so beautiful! i cried at then end! continue writing stories, you truly do have a knack for it. Thank you for writing this beautiful story!

wow that was amazing. your story was just...wow...i loved it! the ending was beautiful and...this was just so totally awesome

Okay, that was the (I hate to say this) BEST Yami no Matsuei - Tsuzuki/Hisoka fic that I have ever read! It literally blew me away. It was freaking awesome...and that's all I've got to say!

Ja Ne

It'd be fine as a one-shot...though it isn't necessary.

That was a perfect ending. sweet and satisfying! Thank you so much for writing this emotional rollercoaster. This is one of the only Yami no Matsuei stories that I have truly enojyed, due to the fact that it has true to the characters, and it was an excelent plot.

Gorgeous. Loved the ending. _ That made my day. My computer was broken so it's been hard to find time to read this. . Stupid computer, work for me!

I loved it. Now I've got to work on my twisted fic. (*laughs nervously)

Well, ttyl

Kiko812 ~_

OMG! This ending was fantastic! Your talent didn’t seem to have run dry at all!

I liked when Tsuzuki walked in on Watari and Tatsumi, and also the small changes and love between all the characters. It really brought a sense of closure to the story.

Of course the sex scene at the end was like the cherry on top. I liked that you didn’t make Hisoka miraculously all better, and still acknowledged his fears throughout the whole thing. The dialogue and actions though this were really believable and in character. I particularly loved that Hisoka was willing to go through with it even though he thought it would be painful, but Tsuzuki set him straight (not literally of course). .~

Wow, what a great story! It was so much fun reading this, so I’d like to say thank you for contributing such a great piece to the YnM fandom!

OMG I can't believe this story has come to it's end T.T I'm going to miss reviewing your story. Anyways beautiful ending I don't think there would have been a better way to end this story with a Tsuzuki and Hisoka lemon XD It was really good. And I'm so happy Yuro is staying with them now they can all be a happy family and that scene in Tatsumi's office

" Watari had been wrapped like ivy around the shadow master and by the looks of it Tatsumi had been enjoying just as much.

Tatsumi cleared his throat and straightened his tie a faint blush across his cheeks but Watari being the little devil he was only mirrored Tsuzuki’s grin and slid his arm around Tatsumi’s waist dipping his hand into Tatsumi’s pants pocket.

The shadow masters eyes widened and he let out a strangled noise." *snicker*

Ah ha ha that cracked me up that is so like Watari XD Well hope to see some more YnM fics from you in the near future _~

Me: -mouth hanging open like the Gushoshin when they saw the new library-

Muse: -same-

Me: Holy hell that was awesome! Seriously, I am in awe of your ability to write fight scences. That was so cool.

Muse: Plus the characterization still managed to hold true even though it was a fight scene. That's rare.

Me: Plus I'm glad Yoru managed to hang on. She is not a damn Mary Sue. Matsushita may not have created her, but damnit, she belongs in this universe just as much as the others do!

Muse: Plus that fight scene had more twists than a game of limbo. -see Chrono's questioning stare- What? They can't all be gems.

Me: And now... Tsusoka, please? -fangirlish squee-

Both: We seriously love your fic. Keep up the good work, and we'll see you when we get ungrounded!

Holy hell can you write! I love this story! An emotional roller coaster that's for sure! Thank you so much for letting me be able to read this. I'm not sure how long you plan to make this but please keep up the good work.

You should see me, my computer broke so I'm sitting in my room squinting at my itouch trying to read this. . Anyway... Good chapter! I really liked the begining with Yoru and Hisoka, Hi-chan's lines were so good! _ Yay they beat Muraki. I still think you need another chapter to end it or add some other twist, but anyway, keep up the good work!

-Kiko

awesome chappie cant wait for more

Me: Dude, what the hell is wrong with these people?

Muse: I totally agree with you, and I'm the critical one.

Me: Seriously, this is one of those extremely rare, well-characterized gems, so why haven't more people reviewed? It's inconceivable!

Muse: And we hardly ever get to use that word!

Me: But yeah, I think this fic is awesome, and I'm sincerely sorry I didn't catch it earlier.

Muse: Better late than never, Chrono.

Me: Right. Plus, it helps that I'm a freaky little sadist, so I loved this chappy. I have a strong hatred of MurakixHisoka unless its one-sided rape scenes. Then I love them. (Told you I was a freak.)

Muse: And although there were grammar errors, I ignored them in favor of the story, even though Chrono's the author and I'm the editor. The only comment I have is that you used "where" a lot when it should have been "were".

Me: And for him to ignore errors for a story is a damn miracle. He's never done that for any of my fics. But seriously, this one was so well written that I could only get about two chapters done a day, and I'm a fast writer. Plus, after reading the first four, I got grounded for two weeks, and I was like, "OMG! NO!"

Muse: She was on pins and needles that entire two weeks. And oddly enough, when she was grounded from the computer, her grades plummeted.

Me: Shouldn't it be the other way around? But yeah, this fic is amazing and I am hooked on this as much as I am on caffeinne. That's a wicked addiction.

Both: We are crazed YnM fans totally in love with your fic. This is Chrno21 and The Muse, out!

Me: Until next time!