nice chapter i an't wait for the next one ! :)

wow,you should totally do more for this one! it's good... so far! :D

*shakes head* Hes got a lot to learn. Anyway great story. Can't wait for an update.

cool the story sounds intresting

great concept, i like it. cant wait to read more :)

Great Start! Please continue, don't be like those other authors who don't finish their stories.

Now this is a REALLY interesting idea - that he has to find love before his 21st birthday, but he's NOT a Beast. I hope the fact that he's still human and a prince has a big effect on the way he acts - for example, instead of locking himself away, he could hold big parties and invite lots of girls, trying to find the right one...or he could travel around the country pretending to be a commoner, hoping to find a girl who doesn't care about his wealth...there are a lot of interesting ways this could go that would be different from the movie! I'm very curious to see where you go with it!

One small suggestion I have is to read over your writing closely, or get a beta - you have a spelling mistake/typo even in the TITLE, which doesn't look good, and there are some grammar and punctuation errors in the fic itself. If you proofread before you post, or have someone else do it, it would make a big difference.

Also, this line didn't make sense to me: "They were so happy at Christmas, his parents, that they showered him with gifts and attention. After they died, his servants followed vein of that tradition. And so, as the years went by, Vincent became crueler and more unkind to his servants and those around him." Why would the fact that his servants give him presents make him CRUEL to them? There's a gap in logic there that I'm not quite following.

Otherwise, very good and creative beginning! Having Maurice be friends with Leonardo Da Vinci is clever, since they're both

inventors (although I'd think Da Vinci could help Maurice with his career more!)

keep going