With Ziva and Tim going at it like that, how long til Ziva is pregnant with Tim's child and married to Tim?

McGiva

wow-that's all I can say!

thanks :)

Let me begin by saying that I really love this story, in spite of having to think about Tony dying...which I hate to think about. I think you beautifully captured a basic need for affirmation of life between Tim and Ziva, giving us a very senuous peek into two hearts in need melding together as one.

This is so bitterly sad, but so beautiful. Well done.

Damn Nicely done. The emotional content nicely balanced, the relationship developing over time and nice to have Tim knowing what he is doing in bed without anything ridiculous, or awkwardness.

Very nicely done, very enjoyable read

I loved this. I'm glad that didn't really happen to Tony, but if it led to something like this happening, well... Just kidding. But I do love McGiva. Excellent story!

Great story, but so sad! McGiva was cute, although if only it could happen under more happy circumstances. Nice job! :):)

well this was sad and yet made a sweet McGiva, good thing it didnt happen though nice story though