okay, one, LOVED this story! two, it had its ups and downs, but that was what kept my attention! and finally, three... how did the transformation work? like, was it magic, something to do with blood or what? I'm curious

This was the longest fanfic I've ever read. I laughed, I cried, and I loved every word of it

I really really like it! However, this no communicating on the pact thing is really annoying and inconvenient for them all, like seriously, someone grow a pair and tell everyone! I bet you Ryou does it. Or Jou.

That is lovely omg

I TELL YOU BAKURA IS GOING TO KILL ME WITH HOW CUTE HE IS JESUS

That is wonderful. I find it amusing that Yami went with Seto to check out his mate. However, it makes part of the story, when the guys all meet up after the ritual, it makes it not really make sense. When Yami was caught off guard at what Yuugi looked like.

Dude I really can't handle all this fluff, I feel like my insides turn to goo and I get all squirmy and GAH.

Aha, so it was Bakura and not Akefia. Also, Yami is the one with light skin, and Atem is the one with dark skin. I guess it doesn't matter much though since they're actually the same person though.

RYOU'S MATING WAS SO FREAKING CUTE OH MY GOD. BAKURA, OR AKEFIA WHICHEVER YOU HAVE DECIDED TO USE, WAS SO TENDER AND SWEET I HAD TO SQUEE.

Why. Why is the word 'diddle'?

Seto was so sweet I almost wanted to cry! And then JOU had to go and be an ass. I bet you Seto would've stayed if you hadn't yelled at him Jou.

How do you take a lazy dump? Like I'm just picturing Jou sitting on the toilet with his elbows on his knees and his face in his hands and just kinda groaning.

Okay, Jou's mom is Mrs. Potato Head.

Whoa whoa whoa! I don't think guys talk about touching themselves like that! And the phrase 'broke my virginity' makes me want to giggle because it sounds so funny.

Machocist, that's what you described Malik as. Someone who likes pain.

Seto is the blue eyes obviously, and as for lavender... It's either Marik or Yami. People change their eye colors all the time. Atem has red eyes, but I think the lavender really is Marik.

I like how Yugi's thinking about the kids, not just him and Yami.

I noticed that Ryo was the only one who didn't get a nickname. I loved how different each of their experiences were, and how you still managed to get the Whisperer's personalities through it. Will they see their lovers more than the expected two times? Please say yes.