Considering the story is 12 years old, chances of update, or this being read even, are very close to none.
That being said, this story is great and I would love to see more of it. Hell, even if I have to do it myself. (Considering I get permission and have the inspiration to it.)
A man can hope.
If this is ever seen, PM me, I would love a quick exchange of words.

Sincerily,
TakatoMakino

This was very well written! Everyone is IC, and the story is quite interesting. It's left me hanging, you know! (that's a good thing xD)

Please do continue... if you still plan on doing so.

That was really good :) Any chance that you'd consider continuing this story?

This is a very good fic. You captured the personalities quite well. But there should have been more whipping :). And I never knew Franziska was the soap opera type (read: All My Lawyers). But I guess you can't see what's going on in her head so you never know. Great job by the way. All hail Phoenix/Franziska!

wonderfully laid out so far and the characters are well within their boundaries that we see in the game and i luv the scenario you've laid out so i can only hope u decide to run with this, it's been over a year now and im not sure if this is a deadfic u dropped straight off or have chapter 2 sitting half finished in your my documents folder or something but i can only hope u give it a bash because i think i will thouroughly enjoy it if u do

Is this a oneshot? I hope not, because it seems kinda unfinished. I rather like PhoenixxFranziska!

heh.

This is good. Keep writing. My only complaint is that you forget to indent your paragraphs.

That last sentance was just absolute win. I mean, it perfectly sums up his entire day-he had to run six blocks in the rain, arrived at the courthouse in an amazingly bad state, had to take help from his arch-enemy, was stuck going through boring papers and files and, to put the icing on the cake, gets stuck in a room in darkness with said arch-enemy. It really has to suck for him. But anyways-I liked this. It was interesting, the grammar/spelling was great, and the chapter leaves tons of oppertunities open for possible storyline developements. I hope to see more...3/3

I can tell this is going to be good.

Hurry up and write more. _

Very good story, I can so see Franziska saying some of those things to Phoenix. Keep going I’m sure things will get interesting now that the lights are out. (smirk)

"This just appeared in my head" ... sounds like me. .- I write whatever I think of. lol.

about the actual fic: lol All My Lawyers.

That was nicely written, well constructed and in character. can't wait to see the next chapter!

LOL. "Shut your foolish mouth!" Classic Franziska. What I really liked was Phoenix's reflection at the end...where he sees Franziska as what she inevitably is-a girl. I haven't read too many fictions where the author draws attention to the fact that she's still quite young (and probably full of problems due to her extraordinary upbringing). Nice bit of work there.

I am intrigued by the direction you'll be taking this. *Impatiently awaits next update*