Maybe I'm spoiled from reading What Once was Lost (read it, it's amazing), but your dialogue and... shod we call it perspective? From our friendly alien robots is ... very human. Sorry, it just breaks my SoD a little when Kaceystar refers to Elita as her "mother" instead of "carrier," among other small discrepancies.

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Or is this a human-born-as-a-transformer reincarnation fic? That would make much more sense if it was.

Aarrgh I love this fic so much! Kacey has given me plenty of ideas for my own!

Hi! I have been reading this story over the past two days and I absolutely love it. It is so well-written and thought out. The fact alone that you updated nearly fourty chapters in three months is shocking and amazing enough! I love all the characters in this story; they are so detailed. You have a gift of making them seem so human and real. I love Kacey's character, for an OC she is incredibly detailed and complex in her charactorial (is that a word, I don't know, it seems like the right word...Oh well, I'll keep it!) way for thought and emotions. I was so relieved when I saw Elita was still alive, I felt so bad for Optimus and Kacey to lose her so tragically and was so happy when you revealed she was alive still. All the different couples are fantastic as well, I love them all! I find the idea of Kacey and Bumblebee being together great and I really can't wait to see that progress. Sadly, I may not be able to get to that story for another week as I still have to read the second and the day after tomorrow I have to leave on a four day camping trip which will put the reading of the trilogy on hold until I get back. But, I will definitely finish this triology and wil speed read the rest of today and tomorrow as much as I can, hoping to at least reach the end of the second story. Well, I better head to that now! Talk to you there!

I see... I'm just gonna sit over here and be stupid. In stupid land. I retract my previous comment. You've explained the name. Still... weird name for a star. /bangs head against wall

Kaceystar? Kacey...star? Just why?

I can't. I'm sorry I just can't.

These are giant robot aliens who take their names from loosely translated English. I mean animals, mechanical parts, or space words I get- they're ALIEN ROBOTS for gods sake- but Kacey? KACEY!?

I'm sorry but no... just God-primus no...

Loved tickle part with Optimus and Kacey.

Thanks for the wonderful story! Looking forward to finding and reading the next chapters!

I just finished reading this. It was very well written and I love Kaceystar. Now I can't wait to read the sequel!

cool story

AAW! this is still amazingly cute, and icant wait to read the next to!

heading off to read and review the other two

Prowls-little-angel

aaw! so cute! I loved this

oh man, now THAT is a kick ass fight! it was amazing, and I love this story, cause its awsome

YRES! aft wppin ho!

oh Lennox...nice chapter

*smirks* you gotta feel sorry for the cons, thier all so stupid. next an aft whuppen and an awsome chapter, nuff said