I like your story I hope you ad more stories

owe this is so cute i know this is probably abandoned but this story but i really like it and if i could adopt it please let me know

its been two years! TT_TT plzZzzzzZzzzZzzzZ updatEeeee

Wow... That's bad. Poor Syrus. I hope everything turns out to be okay.

Update soon! I have to find out what happens next; this story is so good.

This is really good so far, i really wanna know what happens next so please write more

He told Aster...o.O Like I before you're really good at the emotional thoughts. What's going to happen next? Update very soon! This story is very interesting..I mean this is a pairing that I've never thought about but you got it working out in an interesting way with Zane as the predator...to lead th SyrusxAster..*stops rambling*

Zane is like so horrible... _ I feel like smacking him..I bet it's Aster that Syrus calls out to. Another pairing to the story..o.O? I read the author's note..XD

I feel even more like glomping Syrus...Wow you're really good with putting his thoughts along with his movements. Had to say that.

Poor Syrus...I'm not good with reviews. XD I feel like hugging Syrus.

is it wrong that i laughed a little? i find it interesting that you injected humour into an otherwise dark senario. very good however, and i would love to read more. please update soon!

Well... at least Aster can help Syrus... right?

(Cricket sounds.)

i love how wonderfully dark you make it... Please update

Hm, it almost seems like Sy's starting to develop a case of Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.

Awesome chapter!

Can't wait for more!

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