nice POV! poor guy, must be horrible not to remember anything...

love it!

Dude! SOOO good! Can I get a sequel? ;)

Fun story with a very clever twist that I didn't see coming until I was upon it. Thanks for writing this. :D

Nice.

You really had me going there for a minute, but wow poor Charlie. Now he's going to get teased by his brother on top of the whole "amnesiac and thinking he's Dan from the FBI" thing. Loved the ending, though. He didn't have it in him- he was Don, after all, in that moment.

Not bad. I especially liked the final paragraphs.

I really don't have much to say other than amazing, as always. The twist was great (although of course as a Don fan I'd have loved to see him being the big bad dude). I wish you'd do another with more jokes about the Agent Dan thing...haha!

p.s. Are you in law enforcement? You have so much knowledge of procedure and very specific details...I really can't write Numb3rs fics because of my lack of knowledge (and my lazyness to research of course ;P)

Great story. Really got me there, I totally thought it was Don.

Fun story. I loved the twist. Thanks, Beth

Nice story - loved the whole FBI freeze bit. It was very funny and i really enjoyed reading this well done.

That was Marvellous! I love the way you managed not to give away who the main character actually was for so long, the pace was great, and the whole idea is just hilarious! You pulled it all together brilliantly.

This is the kind of story I will come back to when I need a good laugh.

Actually, I think you may have given me an idea.

Very clever, well-written and enjoyable.

Oh my god! This was a good one! I swore that you were writing about Don. I never thought Charlie! Nicely written!

Really, really, really liked it. Almost fell down from the sofa from laughing so hard. My cat was looking at me with a very puzzled expression. More, please. §:~D

Liked this story alot.