Ahhh! Update this!

Aww man... Why isn't there any more of this? It's awesome! I'm sorry I didn't review more often.. I kinda got stuck in.. :) Please update this!

Hey wadda ya know? She shot him! JUST KISS HIM U FOOL! I wonder if her father is the one breaking in... Or maybe her boss? And for goodness sakes EAT A PIECE OF WONKA'S CANDY! IT IS NOT GOING TO HURT U! I will bring back happy memories though! How the heck did her mother and brother die? Car accident, expedition accident? Reveal more on her past!

AARGH! When are you gonna update? D:

I'm desperate to read a good CATCF romance fic (that I haven't already) and yours is amazing! Please update son!

-throws bags of inspiraton-

That was too cute! Love it!

Oohh, it's getting tense. Keep it up. I'm realing enjoying it.

Wow, this is an absolutley great story! It just seems to draw you in. I can't wait to read more!

That was a truly brilliant chapter, one of your best ones yet. That showdown was awesome and the description put your reader right there. Truly a masterful job there.

If you need a Beta reader (which given what I read, does not seem to be the case), send me a PM. I'll be happy to give it a once over. Believe me, you've put together a real gem of a story though.

I'm looking forward to the next installment, and if it is anything like this one, it was truly well worth the wait. Kudoes on a job well done!

~Yva

oh! YAY! finally a fresh chapter!

this was absolutley adorable, i loved reading every bit of it! i love how Willy is making Rowena 'loosen up' by taking her to fun rooms, like the Strawberry Juice Water Pistols Room! (now that sounds like FUN) its very creative to think up such a magnificent place in the factory.

(i hope this is making sense :P )

anyways, i guess the point is that your writing is magnificent, and i really enjoy this fic! keep going!

-SPUD!

oh WOW i really LOVE this story! i even re-read it..i was looking for some inspiration to fire up the next chapter of my own CATCF fic, and i really cant get over how great this story is!

you HAVE to continue this! PLEASE do! its so good!

-SPUD!

OH WOW !

what an utterly FANTASTIC story!

i usually dont like reading stories that are rather long, but once i began reading yours, i honestly could not stop!

you have done a wonderful job capturing a side of willy wonka that people havent seen before. ( i hope that made sense-im trying to reference the whole thing of willy realizing he likes rowena)_

i hope you continue this story. it is amazing!

-SPUD!

aw awesome story :) can't wait to see the next chapter!

Glad to see you back, I enjoyed the latest installment and will also look forward to summer when you have more time to post udates.

This is going rather well, and I feel really bad for Rowena being thought of as the person who is breaking in. Willy comes across with a trace of overconfidence that could bug anyone, and I like it. You write this characterization very well.

Not much else to say, it was a good chapter. My only question, how can Willy look at his nails if he has gloves on his hands? :) OK, he wasn't actually doing that, but I thought thtat bit was cute. :)

As usual, good job! Looking forward to more. Good luck with those final exams. (yuck!)

AHAHA I love their bantering full of undeniable chemistry. You had me grinning like an idiot. Writer's Block sucks, no? Nonetheless, you're stuff is always gold. Update soon!

Great story! I like the characters and everything, and I can't wait till the next chapter!