This was written twelve years ago, but I have to say I loved it. Forward Remus is lovely.

I really like this. No kidding when you said slash! I am most pleased at your vocabulary mainly consisting of variations of 'Fuck' Or 'Fuckable' No kidding, most people are afraid to use language, and while there is little cursing in this, it makes for the sense of it actully being in their minds. This is well written, so keep writing and thanks! -Potato

It would be great if you would update... Love the story by the way!

Um hot fucking damn. That was fantastic. Loved the imagery.

-drools-

M. And they were cute!

this story is incredible. i love it. and who doesn't love a dominant moony? yum! i really liked the first chapter, it was very poetic and i loved how you shifted from their thoughts to reality. your writing style is truly amazing. anyway, keep writing!

Lol, not just in their minds XD

This was really good and I enjoy your writing style very much. The SB/RL relationship can go either way in my head. I figured that Sirius has a strong personality but Remus can be capable of being quite assertive himself. So, really, it could go either way or be shared in separate situations. Maybe they can change roles depending on their moods? Remus can be slightly possessive but I'm sure Sirius can be just as much so and i don't think either of them would be completely and totally submissive to the other, that's kind of what i like about their pairing. Then again it's just my opinion ,and I really liked what you've written. Keep up the great writing!

YAY! Dominant Remus! I love love love it! I love how he just wanted to watch Sirius lose control to him. It was an intense moment, and I think it was awesome.

I also like how it seems to be getting a little happier, because the first chapter was really sorta depressing-ish. An empty house? Whatever shall they do? XD

See you next chapter!

The way you described Sirius' feelings about leaving in the first chapter was incredible! This chapter managed to be tender and sexy at the same time. Excellent writing!

M, that was nice. More please.

I'm a fan of forward Remus. There isn't as much of it out there.

Wow this was sexy! Great job.

- Gaby

Oh wow! This is such an amazing story! And the author's notes make me happy. You are very talented. I've always prefered dominant Sirius, but you have persuaded me otherwise! *favourites author*

Ohman, great first two chapters.

I think you should definitely make a third to show what happens when they get to the cottage.

D

Oh, I just LOVE forceful!Remus and unsure!Sirius.

Your story is great! Update soon!

Definitely hot chapter. Now Im drooling!

That endling line was something else, it was, so many things cramed into one line, summing up everything that these 2 are and will become, keeping it real and still romantic...this was beautiful.