woa, that was dark, but so very well written :) great work.

Woah... that was brilliantly deep. I didn't excpect this when I clicked on it...

Oh Judai! Why won't you see, Edo you know Ju-chan don't you? Oh please do a continuation!

I don't really know why I liked this, but I just did. Perhaps it was the way you described so well Edo's feelings and wrote him o in character, maybe it was the fact that this is perhaps one of the best characterizations of the Haou and is essence as cold and apathetic soul that strives for something but does not wish to comprehend it, or maybe it was just the fact that it's fun to see characters suffering (either being Edo's torture and denial over the fact that 'he works alone' or Juudai's lack of sentiments, something inconceivable in season 1 and 2).

Like I said, I'm not entirely sure why I liked this fic, I just did. I guess I'll just save it for later reading and maybe I'll get my answer, no? ;)

I loved this story so much! Well told! :D

i loved it

This is just so good. *nods* Well, not good for Edo. It was horrible, and yet, I throughly enjoyed reading the story. The story was throughly dark, and I think that you did an amazing job, and were able to pull it off very well.

-Arlownay

This is one of the few fics with a Haou that I actually enjoy. While I was sad to see that his "I grew up" remark did not make it into this story, I still think that this is probably one of the best characterizations that I've seen of him in this fandom. Congrats on doing such a great job!

*shivers* That was wonderful and horrible at the same time, in the sense of horrible fear and imagined agony at what Edo was going through, and wonderful at the storytelling. You caught them both very well, and I enjoy reading that.

wow, you just gave me the shivers... :( now i'm depressed. you're so good at making stories like this! I love them so much cuz they make me depressed afterward :P LOL. Please write more! I totally love your stories!

Woah. I love this concept. (instant fav)