This is actually beautiful

Damn you. You're making me cry before I go bed!

aw! that was so awsome .. it nearly made me cry... amazing story!

good story D"

Oh my Jashin. You are a truly amazing writer! Deidara is certainly one of my favorites out of the Akatsuki and I was so upset when he died! Your fanfic is sad, but I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be. I love this fanfic, and now I'm gonna go tell all my freinds about it XD.

TT

wow that actually made me cry the last part. it was so god.

AWW!

I love this!

GREAT JOB!

Agh! SO sad! But so sweet. Well, more like bittersweet... You're gonna make me cry!

I thought that was beautiful and the beginning and whimsical throughout the ending. This was a really creative concept you've got here :D and let's hope Deidara really is with his danna now...

cool

That was the most beatiful thing I have ever read. It made me want to cry, dammit! I hate Sasuke. HATE HIM. How DARE he kill Dei-kun! ...Yes. I blame Sasuke. My favorite character always seems to die...-sniffles-

I believe you did an excellent job of writing out Deidara's last thoughts. It sounded just like what Deidara would have been thinking.

Rest in peace Dei-kun...Or keep making big booms in the sky. I like thunder.

Dear GOD that was good. ._. So sad, too. I loved most the way the story was set up.

Very nice.

Well, I really liked that. It seems really cool. :D