Does Regal remind anyone else of a more cool, more sexy, less ruthless Kraros?

Fixed your typo for you. And yes, yes he does.

So why didn't collet ' grandmother not reagenize Anna? I thought that they had met before.

This chappie was touching!

The gratuitous Japanese was completely .

And kind of wrong (as in, it didn't make much sense). It ruined the otherwise perfect mood. u.u

Did you get it from an online translator?

Damn, poor guy.

He was created with the sole purpose of suffering... That's harsh.

Well, at last (mostly) everyone is happy

Back to where Kratos is not

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You're awesome. XD

Camera?
Clearly her priorities are straight!

Pause to drool...
So true! XD

Apparently, I wasn't logged in when reviewing. Oops?

Wah, this is interesting. I found it at Ao3, got curious and saw that you had already put the number of chapters. A quick search later and... Yay! It's complete! OwO

I loved this story! You write so well and I found it so hard to put this down until it was finished. It was a brilliant adaptation of the core story with all the new aspects and of course Ada! I was so so happy with the way it ended! Thank you and ill be heading over to the sequel now!

Ok, I've read chapter 1, and I must say, it is very interesting. I only saw one thing that you might want to go back and fix... At random points you put "Anna", when I believe you meant to put "Ada".

Make no mistake, the rest of the chapter was flawless, or well, if there was more things to fix, I failed to notice them.

Anyways, keep up the good work!

Grand Dragon

lovely story:)
I did see some spelling errors but in my rush to read this I cannot recall which chapters:(
this story has made me want to play the game now...
nothing else to say tho I do think I shall give the Sequal a look:)

cool story

Great story. :)
And really good ending.

I liked that they all showed up to convince Kratos not to leave.
The whole Christmas thing was fun, if a little chaotic, what with the angels all fighting.
Lloyd proposed! yay
I liked Kratos's reaction to Anna's news, and Yuan's reaction to Kratos's announcement.
The journal entry at the end was a nice touch.

um you like wrote ' Anna stopped dead as did COLETTE, Zelos, Kratos, and Yuan.' and uh, Collete is in Derris kharlan!

I read this whole thing in 1 day...
o-o
THIS IS AMAZING. *Gives you Cookie*
But at the end, I think Anna should have got the Tales of Symphonia Video Game. x3