A bit too much, especially near the ending. And their relationship seemed way too forced near the end, you've portrayed a very unhealthy one.

I personally thought the argument was too long/they argued too often. Pride and Prejudice reference!
I know it's too late to guess your age, but I'm going to guess 13 anyway.

This was absolutely amazing...
I loved how it started with that prank :P
Also...the last fight between them
Oh my oh my...I must say, apparently fourth time is a charm coz that was brilliant and so real
It had me tearing up
Great job _

I thought everything was too quick. The arguments were really long too, with the topics changing too fast. But the plot was good, as well as the writing

Woah this chapter was like a really intense round of ping pong.

Awww. I don't want it to end. During that shouting-match I sat like: This is getting ridicolous. Sirius! You complete IDIOT! How could you say something like that?! And Remus! You can't tell Sirius he's a Black, it's the worst thing you can tell him! But Sirius was clearly worse, and YOU COMPLETE BLOCKHEAD!

Anyway, great written, great story, great authorship (is that a word?). I loved it all, and this was absolutely great!

Oops.
And that's not your personal opinion. That's true. It's a fact.

Why didn't he just hex her? He's Sirius Black, who makes life a pain to other just because he's bored (Snivellus, anyone?). He should've hexed her.

Otherwise, great job! I like this very, very much. Now I'm going to read the rest.

Oh, I like this take on it. I've never actually seen R & S pretend to go out and then pretend to J that they are going out for real. I'm interested...

Adorbs. Remus is Kawaii

This.. made me cry .. twice

Awwwwww so cute please update

This is an absolutely fantastic story! You had me crying by the end of it. :')

Love this story 3

You may hate this and it's sequel, but honestly I find nothing wrong with it I love your stories, really. You're such a good writer ;_;