Wow absolutely amazing.

I like your touching,very different from the up the good job.

Love it

My god but this is bittersweet. Alas, can it truly be anything but with Norribeth? Thank you for the engaging read.

I think this is my favourite PoTC story of all time. I really don't know how I'm going to communicate elequently right now, but I just wanted to say that this is an amazing story with a fabulously unique story concept, and you are a incredibly talented author.

I love Jamie! I like the entire thing, to be truthful, even the quasi-happy ending :D

I love it, I always wonder what happened to Will T. I afterwards when the movies end. This is one of the first fanfiction stories I ever read.

I absoluty loved it...I couldn't stop reading...a fair ending, but I still thirst for more. The voice choice was great...I could hear them talking. One thing I may have misunderstood though, it was ten year at sea, one day on land, and so on for all eternity wasn't it...or until somebody stabs the heart and took it's place wasn't it. Or maybe that's how you had it and I just read too fast. But the fic was soo very delicious. I really do want more of it. As you can tell James Norrington was my favorite of the bunch...I was devistated when they killed him off. Enough of me blabbing.

Jessi~

I find it interesting that you chose to make Will and Elizabeth's son so different from his parents. It was very oringinal! It's good that you posted this.

This was beautiful.

I love this piece; it makes me hurt all over again, but I love it. It really speaks to who James Norrington was, and I love how much Jamie resembles him even without meaning to. And poor Gillette... Overall a truly excellent bit of writing.

This was an unexpected piece of writing, but it was very good. You did well and I enjoyed it!

wow... that was very interesting to read... well done on the overall idea and the way it's written