very sweet ;D

these are really cute and easy to picture the characters themselves doing. i love how they are all Alanna and George.

i just reviewed to another story buit here i go again

i really like this one two

by the bay i am Australian 2

Aussie Aussie Aussie Oi Oi Oi

This was absolutely adorable! My only regret is that it isn't longer. I could've read this all day.

It's very sweet, I was beginning to think I wouldn't be able to FIND a decent Alanna x George fic!

How cute! I just love George )

This is the second time I'm reading it, and I still laugh and cry. I absolutely love it to bits.

("Can I interest you in a walk, my fair lady?" he murmurs, every bit the courtier. "To our rooms?")

God. That was probally my favorite line. It just screams George to me. Great job overall. I really like how you added the numbers into each piece, although I had to read it a second time to really get it.

My god, this was one of the best Alanna/George fics I've ever had the fortune of discovering. How do you DO it?

So sweet

really cute!

lol - this made me smile it is so sweet! it took me a while to get the number thing though!

wow. that was really amazing. they were all awesome!

great job!

'abosolutely perfect in every way'-and that's coming from a person for whom nothing is ever perfect enough. I agree, its a great writing exercise-type thing with the numbering. Very succinct. I wonder if tamora pierce ever read fanfic? probably not though i think you should try submiting because you can appreciate it. As the creator, it would be great to hear two of your characters so well depicted. Excellent. I'm going to give you my most highest fanfic complement: So well done, the Author would not object to it, much less would read it enthusiasticly. Hope you do try and send it! The set out is so strong and powerful :) good job!

Great story. I love this pairing, though sometimes it's not written well in fanfiction. Fortunately, I adored yours. Especially the last one. Great writing.