This was very stupendous! You always manage to capture this pair well, and the card sounded so Drakken. I love when writers stress the fact that he's more matured, even though he acts likea doofus. THeir hug was sweet. What made this story 10 times better (if that was even POSSIBLE) was that I was listening to "You are not alone" by Michael Jackson while reading. WOnderful job!

I could practically feel the warm fuzzies when it described them hugging! And I loved how shocked Drakken seemed when he yelled about the bikini. It felt like I could hear them talking, like I was in the room with them. Truly amazing writing.

Aw! This is so cute!

I loved everything about this one-shot. The smoking, the card, the hug; it was just so them. Great job :D

... i loved it. not corny or overdone. :)

Beautifully written. Loved it.

Loved it! 0u0

That was a very good story, but I would of never guessed that they smoked. Oh well, there's a first time for everything.

great fic!Like all your other d/s I loved the mention of Harvey the invisible rabbit.I saw that movie once,I can't remember the title though.

Appreciated the Harvey comment...:)

Very good job in keeping them in-character. Even though: Smoking Disney Charcters? Walt would turn is his grave.

Just kidding ;) Great story. Go on. But on the other hand. I love the open ending.

lol pretty good, better then i could do. i think you should realy write a sequel. please? about them on the vacation and them falling in love? *puppy dog pout* im beggin ya.

good story

Good transition I say. It didn't feel rushed it was great read. What is worth I found the story realistic and I could even say it stayed relatively true to the core of both characters. Great job.

~Zorian

I iled this. Adding to my watch list