I know you're rewriting this, but please don't delet the original! It's just to gosh darn cute!

So...which manner of interfacing did they actuate? If it's up to the reader, I'd prefer a bit more detail to be honest.

Love, love, love this story!

Woah... my mind was blown at the sudden kissing and ending up in Ratchet's quarters... so kinky. Awesome job.

Aww that was utterly adorable I think ratchet and the twins is my second fav paring for the grouchy medic

For sheer WTF? puzzlement, I ended up reading all your stuff. That's not WTF as in a bad thing-just not being able to see the next curveball you'd throw in characters' lives. I realized all my reviews of your work would end up reading the same theme of 'long, intricate, feel-good drama; hey everybody, read this!' so I'll just review here and let it go. XD

Great story, I love it.

Awww, I liked that. Short and sweet. This pairing is really growing on me. :D Though you could probley bring the rating down to T. Nothing was all too descriptive.

bravo. excellent story and great ending. I sorta envy their bonhomme. Indeed. It will never be dull. :) Thank you.

ah. so romantic. really. I just love this pairing. you should be paid to write it.

another awww moment. men. they really need to talk, the dummies ...

nice touch at the end. good reposte by sideswipe.

oh no. now the hard part. the next few. it had to happen but its going to be hard anyway. poor ratchet. poor sides and sunny? very sweet.

no, ratch honey. you just won the trifecta. :-D

this is classic: I know they're shiny and brightly colored

The ending swerving into the intentions of both and the inherent sorrow therein was great. nice deft touch.