I don't like sledding... anymore...

Haha, great story anyway! Going to my faves.

*Glances back and forth between this and "Breathe With Me".* Can I call your writing style bipolar? Or maybe just really talented. The humor in this one is great, but it's very different from your other work that I've read so far. Sleds, Ed's general insanity, brotherly fluff...it's a recipe for instant awesome.

I especially liked this sentence: "I'd rather be in a hospital bed next to you instead of sitting in a chair waiting for you to heal, shaking my head at how stupid we both are for doing what we did, but glad that we had fun doing it together." It reminds me of the saying that a friend will bail you out of jail, but a best friend is in the cell next to you.

Nice job!

Haha. Didn't think you would hear from me again this quickly, did you? Well, I needed to read a good fun Elric brothers fic, so I naturally turned to you! :D

Al seemed a little out of character to me in his anger... I've never seen it directed /at/ Ed like that. But he would definitely be worried about this a lot. How could he not be? So his concern and lecture were well deserved, but balanced out by how he carried Edward back through the town.

I loved the brotherly banter, too. Had me smiling through the entire thing.

Thanks,

Sapphireswimming

Awesome! I really liked reading this story-you kept it funny, sweet, and in-character. Thanks for writing this story! :D

Lol, cute.

Hahaha, this reminds me of the wonderful conversation my friend and I had while walking back to the house after our own sledding mishap. Very nicely done.

W-K

Hahaha...*sigh* such good humor, so cute at them same time. Good work _

thats so funny! i love this Ed really is a horrible driver isn't he...wouldn't want to be with him or around him in a car...

Another chapter is necesary!

Aww! So cute! I wish I could see how beat up Ed is though XD

Hah! The first half sounded like a Calvin and Hobbes strip.

very cute. I liked teh simplicity of the coversation only side. Great job!

OH That was awesome!

And I just remembered- I must have read Breathe With Me and then asked you..? Is that it? 'Cause I remember that story.

Think I like this one better, though. Totally awesome characterization of both Edward and Alphonse! You should write a sequel when they come back and break 18 different bones and someone... Winry? finds them. Or something. It would be totally awesome. I really love the feel of this story.

...OK, now it's REALLY bedtime for bonzo! XD

I love the formatting of this! You didn't even need to describe what they were doing-I could see it so well, even though it was all dialogue. Nice job! And I loved the characterizations too. _