I really liked this. It's interesting how you phrased Cyrus's thoughts and observations. Will you be adding onto it? If so, could you let me know so I can read it?

At first, I thought I was crazy to like this pairing but, now I found others.

I loved the part were Cryus mentions Dawn's(barstowl real name) experinces in the game and what kind of person that made her.

Cyrus was done perfectly. One thing I always wondered about Cyrus is that if he did'nt have emotions why did he care so much about making a new world.

Huh. Very good. This is based of the D/P heroine, am I correct? Very nice. Cyrus sounded very noble, actually. I think he was just a little misguided. Very well written, and a nice name. Barstow is very unique, and not very femmey, which is nice. Well done.

woah... that's a REALLY good piece of writing...

I don't really know what to say, but it is REALLY good... -feels lame-

WADR (with all due respect)

Rayquaza