This is absolutely precious...great job!

Aw fantastic! Like you I really think they were in love. I've only seen the film, but I'm looking for the book on-line (no bookshops have it.) But, from what I know, this is wonderfully in character and so well written! :)

I wanted to write something inteligent and profound in reply to your frankly beautiful story but this is the closest I can get (ahem) AW ! So cute! Seriously this was so perfect it just fits so well. It reads like simply another part of the story that I stupidly forgot to read, I'm going to re read the book and pooft! there this will be.

It was beautiful, sad and brilliant all at once and said everything perfectley even though its only two pages long. And just like in the book and film the relationship is there but its pure and simple not the gussy melodrama or moonlight reomance that suits couples like Amalthia and Lir, brilliant! A new one for my favorite list deffinatley!

Oh, how I liked this little story! It's achingly sweet, and I think you did true homage to TLC here. I always felt for Molly too, and I'm so glad someone else loved TLC enough to conjure up a fireplace dream of it. I liked that Molly still remembers all that old disillusion, and yet has come to believe in a kind of love again. Love potion bit was delightful! Yay. Thank you for writing. :]

This was WONDERFUL. It was completely as I would have imagine it to be if it had been written in the book itself. Beautifully in character and fantastically poetic. Excellent job!

Excellent. Imagery like a poem. Only needed a few spelling corrections and a bit of punctuation. Really, though, it's nothing cringe worthy. This is the only well written oneshot I've found on my two favorite characters from one of my fave books. Thank you for writing.

beautiful. it's like music, like poetry.

exactly as it should be.

Well-written, great imagery, and in-character. Very nice :D

this is an excellent story. it perfectly captures the emotions in the right places and uses the correct diction for it as well. please continue to do good work. please?

This is so me your not the only one who's thought of these two as a couple.

This was very sweet. It made me smile.

This was absolutely beautiful. The number of fanfictions for The Last Unicorn is scarce, and most of them are trash. This was just wonderful. Thank you for the read

Oh! Schmendrick! And Molly! Sque! I so know they're in love too! I have the movie and the book and oh!

Absolutely amazing story. I love Schmendrick and Molly! You're right; there are not enough fics about them. I especially like how you had the opening lines of the book as Schmendrick's story. Once again, wonderful story.

WOW! That was really cute. I really can't write romance stories O_o...I can only write funny stories _ keep up the great work! *i like to play with turkeys*

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