I really liked how you endded this. this was a cool story. and i loved the happy ending. but then i've always had a soft spot for happy endings!

you did a good job.

You have very good talent, I can tell that very much. I wish you luck with your writing skills. :) I must say, though, you should tone down the love making. I personally think they do it a little too much. But that's my opinion.

great story,..just one question. is says in the beginning of chapter 7 that elizabeth was "lulled by his heartbeat". but isn't his heart still in the chest?

this is the dumbest, most boring thing I have ever read

love it

what hAppend with this chapter? im so confussed we moved form roberts to mrs turners bithday?

How come you didnt finish the other story?

hey great story so far, keep going with it i luv it

i gotta tell you i really enjoyed this story lol thats funny was jack did to barbossa~awesome please keep going

I think that it kind of a cool story. you should keep it up.

Aw, Will's back! Sweet. I'm so glad he's going to be in the story from now on.

I luv

Hey I like this story so far, nice ideas. Just with how you use the word couple - it should be followed by 'of', eg 'a couple of days'. Sorry don't mean to be annoying but it was bugging me a bit. Besides that though, awesome story - I'll stick it on my alert list!

true pirates of the caribbean style

great chapter update soon :)